FicAlert! PoT> Square Root of Pride (Yagyuu/Niou) NC-17 Pt2

Oct 16, 2010 19:15

Title: Square Root of Pride
Writer: Everlind
Wordcount: 11 811
Pairing: Yagyuu/Niou (Platinum Pair/D1)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Attempts at algebra (and failing at), bra theft and watermelons.
Summary: Love is like an algebra equation. It may look like nonsense, but is always has one and only one solution.
Disclaimer: The Prince of Tennis belongs to ( Read more... )

fic, rikkai, tenipuri, exchange, d1

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hyakuiro October 17 2010, 18:50:10 UTC
AX'A;,C;LMLXK"OMGYOUWROTERIKKAID1!!!! * W *

This was so funny! Niou's antics especially had me amused throughout, but this:
The biggest one is a little cracked and leaks juice.
This made me lol like nobody's business. Niou you poor desperate misguided boy. XDD

And I liked how you changed the font for the text messages. That was cute.

Seriously, you write characters so well; I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between the team members. Hopefully Marui's metabolism and wits catch up. :P

It was a little weird that they couldn't solve the Math problem though (then again I suck at Math so who am I to say), but perhaps the two of them had so much UST that their mathematical faculties fled? I'm also trying to get my mind around the various '2' and '8' permutations that the two of them got... are they supposed to have some sort of meaning? Because the correct answer obvious does. :P

Anyway, this is three years old, but I think I should dedicate it to you for being awesome:


(I seem to have the habit of drawing fanart and burying them wth?)

Thank you for writing this super duper amusing fic!

Also, dammit where was I during this exchange?! OTL

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everlind October 20 2010, 19:02:02 UTC
Boys are mysterious, yet silly creatures :3

Sorry for the chubby Bunta. I had him squishy during 'A Dog's Life' and since I read in one of the pairpuri's (at least I think it was there) that he was 'slightly overweight'... yeah. I had to abuse it.

I admit I executed the Maths thing rather poorly. I just wanted -so badly- to answer to my recipient's prompts that I decided to try.

Quoted from an anon at the exchange (I had to ask myself xp):

In Japanese, the number 2 is said as 'Ni' and the number 8 can be said as 'Hachi' or 'Ya'. It's taking the first two syllables of Niou and Yagyuu that makes it a short hand way to say their pairing name.

... so looking at it like that they might be arguing about who gets to 'top'. 28 being Niou/Yagyuu and 82 being Yagyuu/Niou.

O_____________O SO AWESOME!!! I love how you can obviously tell who's who :p And Niou (who's being Yagyuu) being all silly. GAH. I love this. I am so honored to see more of your work!! *right click save* ♥♥♥

I am glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for commenting!

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hyakuiro October 20 2010, 20:09:42 UTC
Yes they totally are. X3

Hey don't beat yourself up over it. I remember your post about a Math problem, and am sorry that we weren't much help too... >_<

Oh heyyyyyy. Thanks for the enlightenment! Now I'm fully appreciating that banter, though my mind is straying into gutter territories about the possibilities of '2882' and '8228'-- mirrors? switching? holographic projections? XDDD

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