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katied75 in everbeentobaja

Wait For Me (3/3)

May 20, 2009 12:24

Wait For Me (3/3)

Fandom: Prison Break
Genre: AU/ Angst
Pairing: Michael/ Sara
Rating: PG
Length: 4,160
Summary: Michael returns to face the family he left behind.

( Wait For Me part 3 )

het, michael and sara, prison break

Comments 10

mommytoluke May 20 2009, 17:12:27 UTC

LOVE! Love! Love! Now, if only TPTB would have been in your brain while writing the end...

katied75 May 20 2009, 19:06:49 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I kind of (okay, really) rushed it out and I'm sure that given more time I could have done the characters more justice. I am just tired of feeling sad about what TPTB left us with, and I needed to get my ending down on paper. Now that it's there, I may tinker with it in my own journal every so often.

danni18 May 20 2009, 21:00:36 UTC

Wow, great ending. You wrote their emotions so well. I mush prefer your ending. I hope you are inspired to write some more fan fiction.

katied75 May 21 2009, 03:06:46 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm so happy you liked it. I am going to take a break for a few days, since I've been neglecting real life to get this finished. However, I'm sure I'll be inspired again in the near future.

anacastro May 21 2009, 02:00:17 UTC

So, so perfect!!!!! I love, love ,love, LOVE IT!
Great job! This is my Prison Break, don't matter what's gonna happen THIS is my official Prison Break end!
Thank you so much for writing this. And you should write more, because you are a pro!

katied75 May 21 2009, 03:08:20 UTC

Thank you so much! The wonderful feedback has really made me feel like I should write more. I've wanted to for years, but never felt I could do Michael and Sara justice. I will kick around some ideas and hopefully be inspired again soon.

spunkyar May 21 2009, 04:46:24 UTC

This was a perfect ending. I totally understand that Sara was upset and confused at first. It's a lot to process in a short amount of time, but I'm so glad she gave in to her heart after talking to Linc. Whatever Michael did he did for his family and their future. It's great to see that they have fallen into their new lives so effortlessly. Also it's sweet to see that Michael is now will to follow Sara where she wants and that they are going to be a normal family.

This was a wonderful story, girl!! I can't wait to see more fanfiction from you in the future. Great Job!! *hugs* :)

katied75 May 21 2009, 15:04:34 UTC

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! I figured that Sara would have to have conflicting emotions when he returns. I mean, she's been heartbroken for 4 years and the entire time he's been alive and could have chosen to come to her. However, he has very good reasons why he didn't. She just needed a bit of time to wrap her head around the situation. Thanks again for the great feedback!

liss_evenstar May 21 2009, 13:28:18 UTC

Honestly,you should be the one responisble for writting PB´s final.That is SO much better that I can´t even find words to describe it.

Just one little thing:"..she finally responds, trying as best she can to convey to a three year old something that she can't yet understand." and "... with all the innocense that a four year old contains."
You better edit that and put MJ´s correct age,okay?

Oh!And you know what?You go,girl!The fic was awesome!

katied75 May 21 2009, 15:02:46 UTC

Edited! Thanks so much for pointing that out. By my estimation, MJ should be about 3 1/2 give or take. And thanks for the great feedback. I appreciate it!