fic : in the house of flies (sylar/claire)

[ever_obsessed]

Title: In the House of Flies
Rating: NC-17 (sexuality, violence, language)
Pairing: Sylar/Claire
Disclaimer: Characters belong to NBC, not me; title comes from the Deftones
Teaser: It takes a few weeks for him to match the effects to the cause.
Spoilers: Only up to 3x02
Notes: My first go at Sylar/Claire, for Kathrynthegr8 at the sylar_claire ficathon, and, yeah, it came

Comments

[kathrynthegr8]

OMG. Wow. I'll come back and leave a more coherent comment later. This was incredibly hot and very in character! I love it! Thank you so much for writing it.

WOW.

[ever_obsessed]

Oh, I am so glad you enjoyed.

I've wanted to do Sylaire for a while but never really did it because they really do initimidate me. So I signed up and the stuff you suggested was really fun to work with - it gave a good idea of what to fall back onto, and gave me a lot of moving room at the same time.

So thank you for the prompts, :-)

[kathrynthegr8]

Okay, back now.

There are so many things I loved about this fic, mostly it was your characterization. How Claire says "I hate you" again and again. That Sylar can't help but hurt her a little.

And that it was unbeta'd! You are amazing! My unbeta'd fic looks like... Well not good, at any rate.

I sincerely hope you revisit this pairing again. I would love to read more.

:)

[eeyore9990]

Oh, this is amazing! I love the dynamic you captured here! I can almost SEE Sylar watching her, sort of psychotically intrigued and yet, not really understanding his own infatuation with her. I love how he doesn't really understand what's going on with himself. How he's so irritated when he does. I love her reactions throughout. This is just... *flails* Awesome job! AWESOME!

[ever_obsessed]

Thank you so much for this feedback.

This was outside my comfort zone, so detailed replies are absolutely what I'm looking for, especially in regards to Sylar - he's extremely complicated so hearing that he worked makes me :D like a little dork.

Thanks so so much.

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks so much!

So glad the sex scene worked, *g*

[paynesgrey]

GUH! Good God that was hot. Wowweee. *completely speechless* Man, this was so them, and it really encompasses what I like about this pairing. They have such a wicked, deep and psychological bond and you explored that fantastically here. Excellent job.

[ever_obsessed]

*twirls*

I knew what I wanted to do but, damn, posting was scary - because I wanted there to be no question that, one, it is really dark and fucked-up and yet at the same time, just something that's... there, you know?

Plus, I had fun sort of twisting around the Little Red Riding Hood aspects. [/dork]

[saavikam77]

Holy cow, this was hot! O_O I didn't expect to like this pairing so much, but damn...

*applauds*

[ever_obsessed]

Oh, babe, thanks so much.

This one was freaking intimidating to post, *g*