fic: current (elle/claire)

Jul 19, 2008 22:45

Title: Current
Rating: R (sexual content, disturbing imagery)
Pairing: Claire/Elle
Spoilers: Through 2x11, AU future!fic
Prompt: "electricity" at 5_lovesNotes: I've been working and reworking this damn thing forever so, because the damn Jill/Cindy has become a multi-parter, I wanted to post this as a... I don't know, exercise. I kind of like how it came ( Read more... )

fanfiction: heroes, ships: claire/elle, fic: oneshot

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antinous_wild July 20 2008, 03:11:03 UTC
This is amazing. Just. Gah. Wow. Everything about it blows me away. Beautiful, natural, stunning . . . oh, man, I will totally find an appropriate response to this when I'm not desperately writing fic (or desperately trying to write fic), but for now can I just say that this is probably my favorite Elle/Claire fic ever? Just. So wonderful. ♥

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ever_obsessed July 21 2008, 07:39:51 UTC
:3

I feel like a big dork but your feedback just made so giggly right now and, oh, thanks so much - I was hoping it wouldn't be too confusing because so many layers started building up in this and I wanted to get it posted and it felt finished but I was still worried because what if it just became confusing and rambly and, yeah, thanks so much, darling, ♥

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motylik July 20 2008, 10:23:44 UTC
Wow. This is beatiful. Very them. Very painful. Their emotions are tangible which is awesome! :D I hope you write more for them!

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ever_obsessed July 21 2008, 04:32:25 UTC
*beams*

Thanks!

I hoped it would come across so, yay!

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_afterism July 20 2008, 13:32:39 UTC
This was stunning. So raw and painful and twisted, I love the way you write both of them, with a whole of issues and a messy and poetic co-dependence, and the parallels between the ocean and the shower were perfect. Beautiful! ♥

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ever_obsessed July 21 2008, 07:35:24 UTC
Thanks so much, =)

These two are capable of so much but this kind of co-dependency is probably my favorite because even though it's not the healthiest thing ever, I can see it sort of falling into place if the right (or wrong) things happen.

So I don't think I'm going to get bored anytime soon.

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eternal_moonie July 20 2008, 15:10:56 UTC
This is great, just amazing! You've got such a way with capturing the scene!!! Great awesome work!!

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ever_obsessed July 21 2008, 04:27:21 UTC
Thanks!

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stolen_kisses87 July 21 2008, 05:48:11 UTC
This is amazing. Completely amazing. I actually like Elle in this and that's definitely saying something. Great job.

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ever_obsessed July 21 2008, 07:35:56 UTC
Yay!

Elle love makes me happy, *g*

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