fic: collection

Nov 30, 2011 04:16

Collection
585w; pg-13
Aoi/Uruha
For the prompt 2 different tears.

Uruha'snot really fazed the first time... )

:band: the gazette, -1000w, :pairing: aoi/uruha

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colberry December 1 2011, 15:57:21 UTC
This was so achingly gorgeous.

"You can't have them if I'm here."
Oh ♥ And you know, I can imagine Aoi saying that, being the romantic dork he is, and I just love how it's so simple. A simple solution in which Uruha doesn't have to run circles throughout Tokyo - he just has to lie in Aoi's warm arms. I adore that line.

How could he take that whispered "I love you" as a promise that it wouldn't hurt?
;A; Your writing is just so poignant. The way you say everything, even reveal everything in just a few words, a few subtle mentions ("her heels" and just the brief and broken "ru -- ki") is absolutely amazing. I love fics that can accomplish that and it's a really paramount sign of a wonderful writer.

It's hard to come by beautiful, thought-provoking fics these days (especially for Aoi/Uruha) and as much as I love pieces that have them being dorky and "stable", I always find myself reveling in the volatile drama this pairing can create. And you have done just a gorgeous job of that.

Thanks so much for this fic! I hope to see more from you~ ♥

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evennow_still April 15 2012, 08:38:23 UTC
Ok so firstly, I am so so sorry for taking so long to reply to this amazing comment ;~; I've seen it and read it and read it again but then just stuck it to the back of my mind until I actually logged on to write again.

Secondly, thank you so much! Again for the lovely comment, and also for the recommendation!! I was seriously flattered you have no idea. ♥♥♥

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