Fanfiction: The Price to Pay (Remus Lupin, PG-13)

[evening12]

Title: The Price to Pay
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Comments

[appleling]

Wow! Chilly but awesome! Just... wow!

[evening12]

Aww, thank you for reading this. I'm happy you thought it was chilly. I was aiming for something along those lines.

[yeaka]

There a few interesting things about this I enjoy. The ambiguity of it, for example. I am suspecting the 'he' refers to Dumbledore, but I like how it's merely hinted at rather than stated, and how there's a duality to Remus' opinion on this mysterious 'he.' It's also interesting how the timeline and setting are not explicitly stated, although again I can venture a guess. A snippet of consciousness for the reader's contemplation. Lovely~

[evening12]

Eeep! Thank you for those sweet words. I love starting a story just at some point in canon history and just letting the readers figure it out for themselves. :D