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Challenge five, prompt two

Mar 22, 2006 08:45

Title: The Ride
Author's Name: giantessmess
Fandom: Bad Girls
Pairing: Nikki/Helen
Challenge 5, prompt 2
Rating: PG-13
Words: 800
Spoilers/Season: Spoils season 2 finale.

( I whisper my goodbye to the sunset-makers )

challenge five, challenge five prompt two

Comments 6

cabenson March 21 2006, 23:04:58 UTC

Every naked point of flesh is a signpost she never knew she missed.

Freaking perfect way to tie in the library scene. Beautifully written!

giantessmess March 22 2006, 04:57:01 UTC

Freaking perfect way to tie in the library scene

Thanks, CB. you always do notice even the most subtle references ;)

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giantessmess March 22 2006, 05:02:00 UTC

Thank you. I was surprised how well the prompts worked. I think I'm going to have fun in this community ;)

fewthistle March 22 2006, 02:53:49 UTC

This is our night. These are her keys, her door. The walls are just walls. The only rule is gravity.

then this

But the rules were there all along - her rules, her safety net, her, her her. Already, I want to go back to the moment where I was so sure about what laid ahead.

I love the way that you tied this all together, made Nikki's reactions so perfect, as we watch her swing from the abandon of passion to the reality of Helen's life, of Helen.

Really wonderful stuff here!!!

giantessmess March 22 2006, 06:42:14 UTC

Thank you ;)

I'm glad I managed to make it work.

greenovalfruit June 9 2006, 02:20:27 UTC

I just... wow. Awesome and yay. And utter sex, of course.