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Deus Ex Machina - Chapter 21/?

Sep 30, 2011 03:27

fic, deus ex machina, arashi

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ohmiyaplz January 10 2012, 00:18:57 UTC

Ahha, I know I'm replying to my own comments and that makes me THE coolest person ever, and I'm not just writing this so I can procrastinate from doing homework, but really, GAAAAH.

THIS. THIIIIIIS. :D

To be honest, this is the first OC fic I actually read. I remember coming across one once and reading like, the first 3 sentences and disliking it. The OC's were irrational and I just plain didn't like them. And I also knew that OC fics tend not to get as much love in the community, as they're generally not too well-written and don't have the best storylines.

BUT YOUR AWESOMENESS HAS SHOWN ME THE LIGHT, MY FRIEND. SHOWN ME THE LIIIIGHT~

THIS IS JUST SO ASJHALSJHALSHASJK

YOUR CHARACTERIZATION IS AMAZING. LIKE, I WOULDN'T TO BE ABLE TO MAKE AN OC SEEM REAL IN A FIC IF MY LIFE DEPENDED ON IT. BUT YOU MADE YOURS SO REAL, SO AMAZING, SO AJSHAJLKSHLAJKSH. I HAVE NO WORDS. (LOL I use a lot of Caps Lock XD)

This story is just, wowowowowow.
And I'm so sorry, I wanted to flail a bit on every chapter but I was procrastinating like heck the previous day and I had to finish my work. Too bad thiiiis fic came along and I finished it all in one shot. AND I'M A SLOW READER. THE THINGS YOU DO TO ME ;______;

AND YOUR PLOT TWISTS/TURNS/WHATEVERS ARE SO, SO AMAZING.
In the previous chapter (IDK if this counts as a spoiler or not 'cause it was in the previous chapter, but I sometimes scroll through comments a bit beforehand so SPOILER ALERT~ I guess) BUT OMGAAAAH.

At the last line of the previous chapter, when it was announced that Ohno was Johnny's son instead of Nino, I literally exclaimed out loud "WTH."
I did not see that coming, ahha. :3 But that just may due to my slow-ness xD I was pretty sure that Nino and Sachi were siblings, 'cause she kept on mentioning her memories and I was like "AHA. I'M SO SMART." AND THEN YOU THREW THIS AT MEEEEE ;D

AND THEN. THEN I REALIZED, AFTER READING THE CHAPTER, THAT SATOSHI AND SACHI SOUND REALLY SIMILAR.
AND THEN. THEN I REALIZED... I'm an idiot. XDDDDD

And gaaah, I really have to get back to homework. I have a huge music assignment due tomorrow >_____<

BUT ANYWAYS. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS. ♥

Looking forward to the next chapter~! :D

eva_lee January 11 2012, 04:39:23 UTC

Let me just say that after thinking on it for over a day I realized I do not know how to respond to the amazingness of this comment and I should just wing it because trying to come up with a response that would equal how good this comment makes me feel is a near impossible task.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Knowing that you even decided to click on this fic full well knowing it was OC ridden makes me feel so happy I can't put it into words. And then you suffered through the first chapter and kept on going and you actually liked it and *flails*

Sorry I'm at a loss. I know this fandom is leery of OC's but you give me hope that maybe I can win over some readers slowly but surely. I feel privileged to be your first OC fic, thank you so much.

I have to admit I don't have much confidence in my own writing sometimes I worry that I am making arashi too OOC or that my orig characters really are so fucking annoying that people want to strangle them. Or that the plot is really cliched. It really gives me the strength to keep writing when I see that maybe just maybe people out there might like it and when I see as much all caps as I do in your lovely comment I know that I must be doing at least one thing right.

Don't worry, I don't think anyone saw that particular plot twist coming so I don't think you were slow at all. I tried very hard to keep that one a surprise and hope that I will continue to surprise you in the future.

Thank you so much for reading all 21 chapters (which is amazing all at once, really O__O) and for liking it and for commenting that you liked it with so much entHusiasm that I immediately IM'd my beta and was like OMGGGG LOOK AT THIS AMAZING COMMENT AJSKAHSGJKHALFKDHSKJ!!!!!!!!!!

Though I have a lot of school work too, and writers block T___T I will work hard to get out the last chapters soon!

THANK YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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