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Miles To Go Before I Sleep. A/A. NC-17

Nov 14, 2010 20:12

Title: Miles To Go Before I Sleep
Author: Eustacia Vye
Author's e-mail: eustacia_vye28@hotmail.com
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ariadne/Arthur
Disclaimer: Everyone here belongs to Christopher Nolan and not to me. His toys are fun to play with!
Spoilers/Warnings: Post-movie. For the

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pairing: ariadne/arthur, rating: nc-17, fanfic: inception

Comments 21

scarlet_ebony November 15 2010, 02:59:38 UTC

WHOO! I worship you for writing two versions of this prompt. I especially liked the moment of angst there.

"What kind of an answer is that?"
"The only one you're going to get," Arthur said stiffly.

It was a short moment, but boy, was it good. And the smut was, as usual, very hot.
Thank you!

eustacia_vye28 November 15 2010, 03:03:30 UTC

I had started this one first, but in discussion with my beta about a story (I forget which one, now) she mentioned this prompt as being a good way to show Arthur getting obsessed with Ariadne. I wound up finishing the prequel fic first, and then went back to write the rest of this one.

Funny how similar they are, even if they're two very different kind of Arthurs, aren't they? :)

burstoflife November 15 2010, 03:16:29 UTC

Amazing
"Arthur grinned at her in response. He had so many fantasies that he had promised himself he would try to live out if he ever got the chance. By the expression on Ariadne's face, she didn't plan on sleeping tonight, either." This line cracked me up.

I know i am going to sound like an idiot, but how do the meme work exactly, I am not sure if I am thinking to the right conclusion.

eustacia_vye28 November 15 2010, 03:23:50 UTC

I thought it was a great way to close the story. :)

People post prompts in the community for stories that they would like to see someone write. If it sounds like something you'd like to write (or do as an artfill), then you write it up (or draw it) in response to the post. I tend to be too wordy for commentfic, so I collect prompts I think are interesting and write them when I have a chance. Then I link the fic to the original poster so they know where it is, as well as the fill post. I don't have too many plots of my own in this fandom, so it's a great place to find ideas for stories to write. :)

hungrytiger11 November 15 2010, 04:55:07 UTC

Very interesting to see the two different versions of this prompt-fill. Arthur is even creepier in this version I think. Stealing chewed-on pencils!

Loved the moment of tension post-job, and I love the realization that the mark is recreating someone in his mind too. Underscored Arthur's actions very well.

eustacia_vye28 November 15 2010, 04:59:43 UTC

In both fics, Arthur's a stalker. I don't think there's a good way to do that without making him a little bit creepy. :)

Glad you liked this!

elliesmeow November 15 2010, 07:35:42 UTC

Nice. I love me an obsessive Arthur.LOL And Eames was a sweetie here. So cute.

eustacia_vye28 November 16 2010, 01:51:02 UTC

Eames is so overprotective of Ariadne, it's fun. :) Obsessive Arthur is kind of fun to write, actually. I think that's why I enjoyed writing the prompt so much. :D

nami86 November 15 2010, 11:57:03 UTC

i was the OP and.... OMFG!!! it's perfect *_________*

my two prompts in one fill, and wonderfuly done. I love creepy!Arthur so much :3 THANKS!

eustacia_vye28 November 16 2010, 01:52:05 UTC

WOO!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, hon! This is the fic I was working on at the time I mentioned I was going to try and do better justice to your other prompt. Tho smacking Arthur DID fit the hatesex prompt, just saying. ;)