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This You Can Keep, 3/14. NC-17.

Nov 05, 2010 19:52

Title: This You Can Keep
Author: Eustacia Vye
Author's e-mail: eustacia_vye28@hotmail.com
Rating: NC-17 (language, graphic depictions of violence, noncon/dubcon and actual con)
Pairing: Ariadne/Cobb (chapter 1 only), Ariadne/Arthur/Eames
Disclaimer: Everyone here belongs to Christopher Nolan and not to me. His toys are fun to play with!
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rating: nc-17, pairing: threesome, fanfic: inception

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elliesmeow November 6 2010, 01:06:52 UTC

I love this chapter. I think the characterizarions come through really well. And it's interesting to see the separate dynamics develop between Ariadne and Eames, and Ariadne and Arthur. Also cool to see how Eames and Arthur work together and off of each other.

I enjoyed the softer side and playfulness shown by both men. I feel bad for Ariadne. She's hardly had a moment to get her head on straight since this started and being truly confronted by this pair of vampires has really sent her into a spin. They're not at all what she expected.

Can't wait to read more. Thanks for posting.:)

-Ellie

eustacia_vye28 November 6 2010, 01:10:15 UTC

I thought this was a fun chapter. And the next one, too, actually. Because that's where the larger story really starts in, and I really liked playing around with it.

::pets Ariadne:: She goes through a lot in this fic. It's always tough to be a character I actually like... They tend to go through so much crap so I can write about them. ;)

elliesmeow November 6 2010, 01:26:32 UTC

LOL, yes but they also tend to get lots of smokin' hot sex in the bargain. And generally happy endings, so I don't think they'll complain too much.;)

eustacia_vye28 November 6 2010, 01:31:52 UTC

What can I say? I really really enjoy writing these characters, and the sex is fun. (Even if I can get repetitive. :P)

I'm a sucker for a happy ending to heal the angst. So I do tend to write those more often.

elliesmeow November 6 2010, 01:53:23 UTC

LOL! Well there's a certain ammount of repetition inherent in the process. You were just...expressing that. A bit.;P

eustacia_vye28 November 6 2010, 02:04:42 UTC

HAHAHAHAHA.

Well, hopefully I won't do that with the new one. I don't notice it until it's pointed out since sometimes I can only write a couple of sentences here and there during the day. I don't always reread it before I send things out for beta. :)

elliesmeow November 6 2010, 02:07:00 UTC

Well, that's what betas are for after all.LOL

eustacia_vye28 November 6 2010, 02:14:37 UTC

Of course! ::hugs::

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