X-Men Movieverse: Girl (Bluebell Remix). PG.

[eustacia_vye28]

Title: Girl (Bluebell Remix)
Author: Eustacia Vye
Author's e-mail: eustacia_vye28@hotmail.com
Disclaimer: The X-Men don't belong to me or anyone I know personally.
Rating: PG.
Original Story: Girl
Original Author: greenowl
Summary: She likes to think she's in control.

For aliaspiral's Remix challenge.

Girl (Bluebell Remix)

Comments

[greenowl]

This is beautiful, such a gorgeous compliment to my original piece.

I love-love-love these parts:

Marie smiles at John, hanging out of the window. "What are you doing? Wish you could come on out and burn it all up?"

"Nah. I like the view."

*****

The cherry trees are starting to blossom. She remembers calling them cheery trees as a young girl, before she knew what the future was or the pain it could bring.

*****

"I can't control the powers you have, and it takes all of me to keep all of you in check. Meanwhile, she goes prancing about with my face and my name and acts like it's all okay."

*****
This is what it feels like to be whole.

You captured the essence of the conflict within Marie/Rogue so well.

Great job! I'm completely honored by your work.

Much love,

Green Owl

[eustacia_vye28]

I'm so glad you like it!

I really wanted to play up the theme you had going, and as soon as I saw your title, I immediately had thought of the line "Screams from the bluebells can't make them go away." So I kinda ran with it, and wanted to get Marie's POV, since we really didn't get to see her thoughts in your piece. I'm so happy you like how it complements the original. :)