Well, it's Tuesday in the UK, which is where I'll be on Friday, and since I'm going to be in San Francisco tomorrow for our immigration interview, I'm posting this now. :)
Chapter 26 of Echoes is now up. A little bit of a lot of stuff, kind of...interim-ish. Hope you like it anyway. :)
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Now, onto the chapter. I missed William! I'm glad there was a flashback. I really enjoy how you do circular narratives like that. It's one of the things that keeps everything so interesting. I'm absolutely worried about Robin, because, hey, he's working with the evil one.
Favorite line? It won't be surprising. "Got my eyes wide open here,” he said softly. “And I see my beautiful, brilliant Buffy right in front of me." Yes, melting happened. Yes, alliteration is good.
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Considering we've been together for 8 years, we're really going to have to do something bad to screw this up, we think. ;)
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I missed William, too, hence the flashback. The whole issue of Buffy's education just seemed too familiar not to take advantage of their earlier conversation. It's tough, because I adore William but I want Spike to have a rightful place, too. It's finding that balance that's the trick for me with this fic.
There's more B/S in the next chapter. I'm hoping for more melting. :)
Thanks for the feedback, hon!
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Love the flashback. I'm so glad Giles got to see a little of the relationship. And that he is finally realizing it isn't always the big dramatic romance he thinks it is, that it can also be just about a simple show of support from a boyfriend to his down girlfriend after a hard day.
Very nice. Lovely work.
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I'm so glad the flashback worked for people. I wanted to bring back more of the William, but I worry about Spike losing his time since this is more his story now. Thank you for that. :)
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As usual, wonderful job -- I loved the interaction between Spike and Giles -- both loving her, both not knowing exactly how to take care of her (and make sure she doesn't realize they're taking care of her). I also loved her with Spike at the end. Someone to just love her and believe in her, takes a bit of the weight off. Very nice.
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Thank you for reading, hon. I was all worried about you, you know. Stupid smokers in London.
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Thank you for reading, hon!
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Hope the immigration thing passes off OK (I'm sure it will), and that the journey from over there to over hear goes smoothly. :)
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