Comments | eurekathon: The Girl From Down the Street, Jo Lupo, PG

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The Girl From Down the Street, Jo Lupo, PG

Jul 23, 2008 00:07

Title: The Girl From Down the Block
Author: ALC Punk!
Rating: PG, language, violence
Warnings: er, language, violence, liberties with English grammar
Spoilers: None, so far as I know. For either show.
Written For: maragPrompt: *sigh* this gets tricky. It's more of... an extrapolation of: Jo's very own mystery to solve. I want to see her being competent ( Read more... )

eurekathon 2.0, writer: lyssie

Comments 9

thekatebeyond August 5 2008, 04:52:21 UTC

Heeee! This is so much fun. Yay, Jo! I love the section on vampires best. I'd love to see that scenario on the show.

marag August 5 2008, 13:08:40 UTC

Bwahahaha! My love for Jo knows no bounds :) Thanks so much for the chance to watch Jo shooting and stabbing and kicking!

lyssie February 5 2009, 05:24:13 UTC

*facepalms* Thank you, very very belatedly. =)

sheepfairy August 6 2008, 01:56:13 UTC

Man, I love this a lot! I like the description of Jo as a girl, all pulled tight and ready to hit idiots. And I will love forever the scene with Allison getting to shoot things, and that, with Jo, people really have to earn her respect. And it's nice to see her relationship with Cobb, and how that might of worked as he introduced her to Eureka, and how all that probably affected why she was kinda resistant to Carter at first. And, man, all of the characters in this are perfect- I especially like Henry's parts. And you blended the Torchwood people in really well (and I always love it when people shoot Owen).

lyssie February 5 2009, 05:25:11 UTC

Thank you, very belatedly.

Any time I get to let Allison shoot things is a time I'm happy. After all, it's CANON that she knows how to use all those guns and passed the tests.

havocthecat August 6 2008, 17:48:42 UTC

God. I love Jo, and I love the way you write her. Also, Allison got to shoot something. THIS IS NEVER NOT COOL.

Favorite line:

She was just very certain of her place in the world and how that related to being able to punch idiots in the nose.

lyssie February 5 2009, 05:27:00 UTC

Thank you, very belatedly. =)

havocthecat March 27 2009, 14:11:24 UTC

Reread this story today. Still love it beyond the telling.

trascendenza September 13 2010, 23:43:46 UTC

She was just very certain of her place in the world and how that related to being able to punch idiots in the nose.
OH, JO, LET ME COUNT THE WAYS I ADORE YOU. Oh, wait, this fic pretty much did it for me. ♥