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[The Lie to Me Comment Ficathon] → I'm not lying to you about this.

Sep 20, 2010 12:37

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tv: human lie detectors

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etoilefilante September 20 2010, 11:40:50 UTC

Cal/Gillian, but peter pan is miles away, and you never write me letters

applesred September 20 2010, 13:30:04 UTC

Gillian, mother's day.

Never Gone (PG) Part I crumpled_up September 22 2010, 08:45:10 UTC

I'm not sure if this is exactly what you had in mind, but I hope this works for you. :D (The second part will be right underneath this comment.)

title: Never Gone ( ... )

Re: Never Gone (PG) Part II crumpled_up September 22 2010, 08:46:00 UTC

Every year since her mother’s passing, she visited her gravesite. She always brought a bouquet of white lilies, her mother’s favorite. Since Sophie’s departure, she carried one purple rose to add to the bouquet because in the 57 days she had the little girl, Gillian was quite sure that it was Sophie’s favorite color ( ... )

Re: Never Gone (PG) Part II applesred September 23 2010, 15:20:03 UTC

This is perfect. I love how you wove in Gillian's mother into how Gillian felt about being a mother herself, and losing everything and gaining a sort-of family. I really enjoyed reading this, thank you <3

Thread 7

bluerosefairy September 20 2010, 13:48:28 UTC

Gillian and Emily, sometimes you need another girl in the kitchen.

etoilefilante September 20 2010, 14:37:08 UTC

Reynolds (and Gillian?), you said you weren't afraid to die

Good Men Don't Die (PG) crumpled_up September 21 2010, 01:12:23 UTC

YOU WROTE THIS PROMPT JUST FOR ME DIDN'T YOU? ;)

title: Good Men Don't Die ( ... )

Re: Good Men Don't Die (PG) etoilefilante September 21 2010, 13:55:20 UTC

MAYBE. ;)

This is beautiful. Thank you! I couldn't believe the lack of hospital reactions scenes we got, and this fills the gaps beautifully. My favourite bit? This, because it is just so Reynolds, and so Gillian:

He’ll wake up and crack jokes about how a freight train ran him over, keep the bullets as souvenirs and wear his scars proudly. She’s as sure of this as the life thrumming beneath his skin.

Re: Good Men Don't Die (PG) crumpled_up September 21 2010, 21:09:47 UTC

I couldn't believe the lack of hospital scenes and reactions too! ;alskdfjal;sdkfj And it was Reynolds' last ep! I was going to write a filler scene with Gillian at his bedside, so when I saw this prompt, it gave me the perfect excuse and inspiration to do it. So thank you.

That line you chose was my favorite and hardest line to write. I couldn't find a way to say that correctly and it took me a while, but I'm so glad it worked. Because I could see Reynolds just shrugging it off and Gillian believing in him as he believes in Cal.

♥

Thread 6

tempertemper September 20 2010, 15:15:37 UTC

Cal/Gillian, aftermath

Together (PG-13) 1/2 zolotazirka October 5 2010, 05:09:04 UTC

Better late than never?

Title: Together
Cal/Gillian, gen, 1000 words, PG-13 He didn’t know what to do. Having years of experience knowing what people where feeling before they knew it themselves based on the slightest twitch of their facial muscles had decimated his ability to be surprised by someone. He knew he had blind spots, but he hadn’t realized how big they were. How in the world had he missed such a big secret? Emily was no open book, but he could read her ( ... )

Together (PG-13) 2/2 zolotazirka October 5 2010, 05:09:31 UTC

“With you and Emily? What for, you’ve got your answers with respect to her sex scandal ( ... )

Re: Together (PG-13) 2/2 tempertemper October 5 2010, 10:17:58 UTC

You wrote LtM!!!!

I love it!

You've captured the ease of his relationship with Gillian and I love the bit about the three people he can trust shrinking to two.

Gorgeous ♥