Lie to Me fic: we'll stay inside until somebody finds us (1/1) cal/gillian, pg

Jan 13, 2010 20:31

Title: We’ll Stay Inside Until Somebody Finds Us
Cal/Gillian, no spoilers, pg
Words: 600

Author's note: Thank you to my beta, tempertemper77! Just a little ficlet that came to me in amongst all the longer things I’m working on. It didn’t seem to fit in any of those so it’s out in the world on its own two feet! So to speak, anyway. Set almost any time in ( Read more... )

creative: writing, pairing: you were protecting me?, tv: human lie detectors

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sunspawn January 13 2010, 21:08:00 UTC
awwww this was so subtle and adorable!!

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etoilefilante January 13 2010, 22:17:30 UTC
Yay I'm glad you liked!! ♥

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etoilefilante January 13 2010, 22:21:32 UTC
Aww, it was such a pleasure to read your message. Thank you. Hee, I agree - they so did. Awesome icon!

Thank you for your "cutting room floor" comment. That made me so happy. I had never thought of in that positive a light! I'm so glad that it created such vivid imagery for you. I see everything in images so I'm so happy to hear that I've managed to communicate it well enough for that to happen in your head, too. ♥

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tempertemper January 13 2010, 21:13:41 UTC
I love the start - perfect perfect perfect with him in his apron and the fact that you just know the kind of day they're having and why he would think now is the moment!

You know I love the rest!

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etoilefilante January 13 2010, 22:23:36 UTC
Wheee, I'm glad you approve of the start! I'm also really glad you picked up on that because that's totally how I see this kind of thing happening between them - when they're comfortable and relaxed and just hanging out at one of their houses. I like to imagine that there's food in the oven that they've just prepared together. ♥

♥you!

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devilz_haircut January 13 2010, 21:40:15 UTC
Omg! This is so cute and also carrying a lot of hope. I guess if I'm going to tell you what I like the most about this ficlet I may start quoting every line lol

Thanks for great read!

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etoilefilante January 13 2010, 22:25:21 UTC
I love that you think this carries a lot of hope. I see it that way, too. Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. You always leave me such lovely messages. :)

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devilz_haircut January 13 2010, 22:52:59 UTC
Worth every penny :P

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lunalove24 January 13 2010, 21:58:16 UTC
LOVE.
I could see this happening on the show. (Well, maybe not ON the show, but definitely in 'real'life).

"...because otherwise he’ll fidget (she knows him so well)" = ♥♥♥♥

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etoilefilante January 13 2010, 22:26:55 UTC
Aww, thank you! I would love to see this happen on the show, too. I'd like to think that something like this could happen at some point. Thanks for reading and leaving me your comments. I love that you love the fidgeting bit. ♥

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