A Winter's Walk

[etmuse]

Title: A Winter's Walk
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: G
Disclaimer: They're not mine, *sob*
Spoilers: None
Summary: Jack ponders the nature of relationships
Author's Note: Written for day eight of redismycolour. Another quadruple drabble (400 words exactly).

Comments

[stargazer60]

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

(all my comments -- everywhere -- lately have been less than stellar...sorry I can't say anything more!)

[etmuse]

Thanks :)

[alons_y_padfoot]

Aw! Squee!
You certaintly captured the structure of a relationship well.
But most of all you captured Jack and Ianto's relationship perfectly!
You even had me smiling a genuine smile by the end of it!
This is a beautiful piece, and very well written!
:)

[etmuse]

Thanks, the symbolism in the prompt just captured my imagination in this one (the hardest part was working out how I could make them fall out!)

[nox_caelum]

Lovely :)

[etmuse]

Thanks :)

[hab318princess]

so glad you wrote that, so beautiful and true

[etmuse]

Thanks :)

[teachwriteslash]

This is just gorgeous . . . I love the subtle change it reflects in Jack

[etmuse]

Thanks :) I like to think of it as him finally growing up