Guilt - 11/??

[etmuse]

Title: Guilt
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa, also eventual hints of Gwen/Rhys, Owen/Tosh
Rating: R (some later chapters NC-17)
Disclaimer: Torchwood is not mine. No matter how much I sometimes wish it was.

Spoilers: Better say everything through s2, just to be sure. Begins pre-S1.
Summary: Owen and Ianto run a few tests, but

Comments

[pinkfairy727]

The suspense in this story is killing me. It keeps getting bigger and bigger. My fingernails are going to be non-existent by the time it's finished.

I still love this, just in case you couldn't tell.

[etmuse]

The story itself keeps getting bigger and bigger... I'm going to be completely insane by the time it's finished...

Glad you're still enjoying :)

[missthingsplace]

I am so loving this take on Cyberwoman :)

[etmuse]

Thanks :)

[kitkat0038]

Why does that last line sound so ominous? lol

Can't wait to find out what happens next :o)

[etmuse]

Possibly cos it's supposed to ;)

[morgia]

Hello you !!! Hum, really I love this, the way you take your times to set up the suspense, the mood in your story. Its very interesting and you hooked me at each chapter. I'm always excited and afraid when I see that you updated this series. I think its a brilliant idea, so I'm excited but, I'm afraid that you will desapointed me... Hum, I don't mean you are not a great writer (its the first time I think I read you so I don't have reference), but sometimes I read a series and in the middles its boring or the master idea disappear and its like the writer and the reader are lost...
lol What I try to say is its great and I wait for the next and you made great work!

Take care ;)

[etmuse]

I'm trying to make sure I don't lose sight of my original plan lol - there are little side plots but even those are (mostly) there for a reason...

I think it can be very difficult when writing a long story to stay on track, especially if you don't have an accurate idea of where your story is going - I have all of the pivotal scenes of this story already in my head (and I know exactly how it will end) so hopefully I can avoid this.

Glad you are still enjoying, and hopefully you will still be enjoying in another 40 chapters...

[morgia]

What ???? 40 chapters ??? LOL Ok, well, keep you original idea and be creative and I will stay hooked... No, but, really, I'm happy but its a big challenge for a writer.... I wrote a five chapter and epilogie series and I was so afraid to lose the plot somewhere... ;)But, hé, I trust you !!!!!

[stargazer60]

I love the slow buildup you've been giving us with this story....

Looking forward to the next part!

[etmuse]

To be completely honest, in the original plan the buildup wasn't meant to be quite this slow... it just turned out that way when I started writing it...