FIC: 'Cause It's You And Me (PG; Brian/Justin, Ethan)

Jan 25, 2007 01:27

I love school. I love learning. But it leaves me so darn TIRED, and I can't write fic.

However, here's one that I completed a while ago and got beta'd, but only just had the time to look through. I hope you guys like it!

Title: ‘Cause It’s You And Me
Author: Etharei
Fandom: Queer as Folk (US)
Characters: Brian/Justin, Ethan
Prompt: 4 (Dance)
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paddies January 25 2007, 10:15:15 UTC
OMG I have no words to tell you how much I love this. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE.

It's totally, utterly perfect. ♥

Can I archive?

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etharei January 25 2007, 10:59:54 UTC
LOL, and now I have no words to say, except a great big sloppy THANK YOU. And to think, I was actually considering scrapping this altogether before I sent it to beta ^_^

YES! yesyesyesyesyesyes....

Wheeeeeeee! You don't know how happy you've made me!

*GLOMPTACKLEHUGSMOOCHES*

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paddies January 25 2007, 11:33:05 UTC
Seriously, I totally adore it, especially the parallel between the actual prom dance and this "new" one....
I love that now they're both somehow damaged and imperfect but at the same time they fit together in such a perfect way that everybody, even Ethan, can see "teh love". ♥

Also, I absolutely adore the way you decided to "trigger" Justin's memory...the "Justin remembering Prom" is always been a very favorite "plot bunny" of mine, but it's often quite difficult to do it "right" (whatever right means).

I do think the way you did it it's absolutely perfect and totally believable. :D

In conclusion: *adores*

And I wouldn't mid a B/J centered sequel...*is greedy*

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paddies January 25 2007, 11:35:25 UTC
I wouldn't MIND, even. :|

*kicks LJ and its "not-edit-comments* rule*

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etharei January 26 2007, 06:07:57 UTC
Oh my, your words have left me swooning ♥ I think one of the things I love most about Brian and Justin is the very human flaws each of them possess, and yet when they're together it's... the perfect love with a very human value of 'perfect', you know? I watched a clip of the prom scene before I even started watching the series, and without any knowledge of the characters or the series I totally fell in love with the scene. *happy sigh ( ... )

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paddies January 27 2007, 21:37:11 UTC
I'm so glad that you liked the trigger; I wanted to make it subtle and sudden, but still make it feel significant to Justin himself.

I honestly think it's absolutely perfect. Both the idea and the writing. ♥

I've read a few fics that didn't quite connect with me even though it seems like nearly the whole fandom loves them.

Yeah, it happened to me, too. Personal tastes are a strange thing, aren't they? ;-)

Anyway, as you probably noticed by my multiple rambly comments, I did love this story a lot and I would be thrilled if you'd ever write a sequel. ♥

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