Comments | etharei: FIC: The Morning Surprise (PG-13; Debbie-POV, Brian/Justin)

etharei

FIC: The Morning Surprise (PG-13; Debbie-POV, Brian/Justin)

Jun 25, 2006 05:08

Just three months ago, if anyone had asked me what fandom I outside of LOTR I was most likely to write fanfiction in, I would have said Harry Potter (am a Sirius/Remus shipper). Don't worry, the LOTR ones are coming along, now that I've got this out of my system.

Written for the 25fluffyfics fanfic challenge.

Title: The Morning Surprise
Author: Etharei
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25fluffyfics, qaf fanfiction, slash

Comments 25

Your unbetaed stuff... ennorwen June 25 2006, 11:55:21 UTC

Is way better than 80% of the betaed stuff out there, love. This was just terrific - And what a great use of the prompt - Jus is a puppy, for sure, at least in the first season. And you are absolutely right - no way would Brian have a pet! Well, a pet animal that is. God, Rei, your voice in this piece is perfect. Loved the ..."none other than Brian fucking Kinney." So appropriate - can't use those phrases or words in Tolkien fanfic that's for sure ( ... )

Re: Your unbetaed stuff... etharei June 25 2006, 20:47:18 UTC

OMG, sweetie, you are so unhealthy for my ego ^_^ *squishes* Thank you so, so very much for your words, your feedback's just left me completely speechless. I'm so happy that you liked this, because I guess one's first attempt at anything will always have some influence over their later work and I was really nervous about writing something that's so different from the LOTR style that we're both comfortable with. On that note, it is a very refreshing change; I never thought I'd be so happy to have an excuse to exercise obscenities and modern slang which can't be used in Tolkienverse (points gleefully at icon *g ( ... )

Re: Your unbetaed stuff... ennorwen June 26 2006, 09:59:01 UTC

Of course, I'd be happy to read through them! Am fairly confident that I could catch anything major. You're right about Brian's "voice" though - I'll tell you why on the other thread...Thanks for the info on the other fanfic also - Sian265 has turned me on to the same! Do you just want to email them to me? Or, do you want to set up a closed community (just you and me) and post them here on LJ? That's what Rozzan and I do for our Tolkien stuff. Let me know. Love, E

paddies June 25 2006, 12:25:10 UTC

I love it!! :x:x:x

Great Debbie voice and very lovely writing. I'm looking forward to your next stories... ♥

etharei June 25 2006, 20:49:54 UTC

*squeee!* Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, hope you'll like the others too :-)

*glomps*

faramir_boromir June 25 2006, 15:26:32 UTC

Gorgeous. A rarely done perspective on their relationship, and well-written. Thanks for this.

etharei June 25 2006, 20:54:10 UTC

Thank you for the feedback! I have a thing for POVs of outside parties, and Debbie's just fun to write. Glad you liked it!

*hugs*

anoriell July 4 2006, 22:04:42 UTC

This is so bloody perfect! Oh my god... MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

:o)

Anoriell

etharei July 4 2006, 22:31:12 UTC

*blushes profusely*

You're back!!! :-D Missed you very, very, very much, hon! *huggleglomps*

And thanks very much ^_^ I think I've started about 10 others, but keep running into blocks.

anoriell July 4 2006, 22:59:42 UTC

And I, you. LOTS. When are you moving closer? Maybe then we can actually chat over a messenger tool... without being 11 hours difference in time zones.

10?!?!?!? Keep at 'em... all in good time. The blocks will eventually move out of the way. :o)

Hugs,

Anoriell

blue_eyedstar August 1 2006, 14:04:22 UTC

Is it alright if I friend you? 'Coz I've just stumbled onto your journal and read a couple of your fics and I really, really like them, and I definitly wanna know if you're having new stuff out.

etharei August 3 2006, 05:42:50 UTC

I've friended you back! *hugs* I always love meeting new people on LJ and I'm really flattered that you like my fics. I must warn you that I'm not a very prolific writer, and I like experimenting (so very strange things may come out of my journal *g*). Thanks so much, sweets, I look forward to getting to know you better and I hope you continue to like my fics.