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eternally_4ever

[FIC] Don't Look Back [2/5]

Sep 01, 2009 19:16

Title: [FIC] Don't Look Back
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: angst,slight romance
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Vivid description of serious illness and character death

Summary: Yunho finds a boy wandering around the streets. When he talks, he doesn't make any sense at all. Yunho later discovers that the boy is mentally retarded. Without thinking ( Read more... )

pairing: yunjae, rating: pg-13, fic: don't look back, genre: angst, genre: romance

Comments 27

twnklsnowflake September 2 2009, 01:45:26 UTC

HAHA. FIRST. 8D

eternally_4ever September 2 2009, 01:48:02 UTC

lol, as always *O*

twnklsnowflake September 2 2009, 02:32:13 UTC

Ha, I am on a roll, three times:3 -grins-
aww...jae is so insecure...huggles
yes, alot of emotion, yunho is hurting because jae is afriadD:
it'll take alot of patience, yunho hwaiting!^^
update soon bb ♥

eternally_4ever September 2 2009, 03:02:54 UTC

hah, tell me about it. your super fast!!
Jae is so afraid he's gonna be left alone again T__T
And Yunho just wants him to feel comfortable around him

For some reason, I still don't think the fic seems interesting enough. It feels like it's missing something, but I don't know what...more emotion??

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vanillaicex3 September 2 2009, 02:13:47 UTC

MINE :D

vanillaicex3 September 2 2009, 02:15:25 UTC

Aw :), Yunho's so sweet -snuggles-

eternally_4ever September 2 2009, 03:06:51 UTC

Yunho has so much patience when it comes to taking care of Jae
*admires Yunho*

vanillaicex3 September 2 2009, 03:56:20 UTC

:), I know ! ♥ :D

fuyuai2742 September 2 2009, 02:25:31 UTC

damn it. I wanted the first spot :(
I was totally prepared to be all ninja-like but then my computer was being stupid and messed up when i tried posting my own fic (it erased all the spaces. it was epic likethistheentirechapteritwassoscary!!)i'm struggling too Yunho! It's not the same, i know, and you're probably having a much harder time but I swear to you i'd rather have your broken laptop than my crappy Windows 98. Great chappie by the way!!! Next time i will prevail!!!

eternally_4ever September 2 2009, 03:15:48 UTC

lol, sucks that your computer was acting all stupid. My computer is SUPER slow and it takes a while to load. I hate it!

lol, maybe you can be 1st next time, but it might be a challenge to beat twnklsnowflake. She's really fast. Glad you liked the chapter though ^__^

crazyfantasia September 2 2009, 02:28:15 UTC

POOR JAE.... I want him to be happy~~ believe Yunho~~T_T
Thanx for the update, yay!! ^_^

eternally_4ever September 2 2009, 03:27:05 UTC

I want Jae to be happy too T_T
lol, thanks for stalking my fic xD

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eternally_4ever September 2 2009, 03:35:02 UTC

Really, it made you cry? *cries w/ you*
I remember the 1st time I wrote this chapter I cried like a baby (I know, kinda lame)

I can't make any promises to you that it will be a YunJae happy ending *feels guilty*