Interconnected

[eternal_ot]

(my partner is mistearyusdiva2                 'Working in a world famous multinational IT firm had it perks, but not always, especially when you needed to deck up for your special day and have to lie in order to get a leave’, Surbhi rued to herself as she rushed into Tress Pass and removed her Aviators and scarf to be greeted warmly by her confidante and life-

Comments

[i_17bingo]

I didn't want to comment until after I read mistearyusdiva2's entry, and now that I have...

Oh boy.

The sweetness and love behind Surbi really shine here. She's the kind of person whose smiles would be excellent to have around everywhere. And now, after reading the Intersection...

Oh boy.

[eternal_ot]

Ah! Glad you liked Surbhi here...'Oh Boy' sounds cool for me...Thanks for being the first one to comment..:)

[beeker121]

Surbhi is very likeable, though her plan to propose to make up for a fight had me a little worried even before I read your partner's piece.

They both deserve better than Rahul.

[eternal_ot]

Oh! yes..I agree about both deserving better than Rahul...Glad you liked Surbhi . Thank you for stopping by..:)

[uncawes]

Oh my. Surbhi is in for a rough night, methinks. I feel for her
Nice work

[eternal_ot]

Yeah...I don't know what's in store for her...thanks..:) Glad too see ya <3

[rayaso]

I have read both entries -- poor Surbhi. This was so well written. The descriptions and dialog were great. You led up to the possibility of unhappiness, without showing Surbhi's fate. Even with both entries, the ultimate fate of Surbhi is not revealed, although she appears headed for unhappiness. Great entry and intersect.

[eternal_ot]

Yeah...you never know what happens next...I can think of more than one possibility....maybe , just maybe Surbhi will handle herself well...:) Thanks for the appreciative words..means a lot..:)

[jem0000000]

Uh-oh, poor Surbhi.

[eternal_ot]

Yeah..she has my sympathies too...Thanks for stopping by..<3

[jem0000000]

You're welcome. :)