how's this?
the lingering stench of old urine fills the air. there's a girl huddled in a corner of the subway car rocking back and forth. she's humming her favorite tune, eyes closed, her head lolling to the beat of the wheels. she feels safe.
the only other passenger is an elderly man. he shakes from alzheimers and he mumbles something under his breath. every now and then he looks at her to see if she'll look back at him, hoping to strike up a conversation. he feels lonely.
they go through the tunnel. lights flicker like strobe lights, and the ghostly faces of companions that have come and gone with time, flash before him.
the fleshy claws come out from the darkness. he can see it tearing at the girl's face. it's peeling the skin off of her skull like an orange. she tries to scream, but it's too late. her throats already been torn out.
see, i can't put it together! i want to make a comic/manga type thing cause it's easier for me to express what i'm talking about visually. so that's a taste of it... how do you like so far?
the only other passenger is an elderly man. he shakes from alzheimers and he mumbles something under his breath. every now and then he looks at her to see if she'll look back at him, hoping to strike up a conversation. he feels lonely.
they go through the tunnel. lights flicker like strobe lights, and the ghostly faces of companions that have come and gone with time, flash before him.
the fleshy claws come out from the darkness. he can see it tearing at the girl's face. it's peeling the skin off of her skull like an orange. she tries to scream, but it's too late. her throats already been torn out.
see, i can't put it together! i want to make a comic/manga type thing cause it's easier for me to express what i'm talking about visually. so that's a taste of it... how do you like so far?