Ollie is so much fun. I was tempted to write a bit more about him, but I was already way over the limit, so... Glad you liked it!
And absolutely, friend away! I'm glad you told me though; since I don't really use the whole friending thing, it usually takes me a few weeks to notice and friend someone back.
*and ten seconds later the obvious hits me* You are the author who wrote me that wonderful "Christmas Miracles" fic! When I saw your name over here I immediately thought, "waait a second, where have I seen that name?" I already left you a review in which I babbled continuously, so I'll just say thank you one last time :)
This was adorable. Bruce being a petulant, ill-tempered brat was especially amusing. I have a feeling Clark is going to get plenty of blackmail material from this incident.
The high-pitched giggling drew his attention. Bruce eyed the fourth-graders around him with all the wariness he usually displayed when dealing with psychotic clowns or schizophrenic ex-attorneys. After more than two years as Gotham's protector he knew-the more innocent they looked, the worse they were.
This part had me laughing aloud, especially when I pictured it in my head. A big man with an expensive suit squeezed into a tiny desk, eyeing a classroom full of children with his patented BatGlare.
*grins* I'm so glad you liked it, and especially glad I could make you laugh! And that image was exactly what I was going for, so yay! I am obviously developing telepathy.
That was hillarious! I love how men are such big babies when they catch a cold and Bruce is no exception! :D Sneezing!Batman is too funny an image! ^_^ Wonderful fic, loved it!
Aww, this was... LOL, this was a lot of things! I have great love for Bruce being all 'a-HA! filthy germs are for losers, Batman FTW!', because he's just bratty enough to act like that sometimes. Your young Dick is way too adorable to my brain, I just turn into a puddle every time I read him.
And your Clark! He's so very, very patient. I love the sequence of going out to pummel the baddies because he's angry with Bruce. Bruce can be quite infuriating when he's being stubborn.
But seeing Bruce finally tell Clark why he's afraid of telling people was just too perfect. My fangirl heart melted right there. Silly, silly boy, but he does have a lot of issues with people he loves going away.
His mumbled crazy hallucinations on the roof top were hilarious. Calling Clark an evil doer had me laughing like crazy. Great work!
Bruce is usually such a stoic macho man, I have fun writing him as someone who also throws temper tantrums and sulks and is a terrible patient.
And since all the comics I've read insist Dick was freakin' adorable as a child, I consider that a valid excuse to make him as cute as possible.
I figure, if Bruce beats up criminals when in a bad mood, Clark must have picked that up from him shortly after they started dating--and I'm glad the scene of sticky sentiment worked for you.
And thank you for such a nice review! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
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And absolutely, friend away! I'm glad you told me though; since I don't really use the whole friending thing, it usually takes me a few weeks to notice and friend someone back.
*and ten seconds later the obvious hits me* You are the author who wrote me that wonderful "Christmas Miracles" fic! When I saw your name over here I immediately thought, "waait a second, where have I seen that name?" I already left you a review in which I babbled continuously, so I'll just say thank you one last time :)
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The high-pitched giggling drew his attention. Bruce eyed the fourth-graders around him with all the wariness he usually displayed when dealing with psychotic clowns or schizophrenic ex-attorneys. After more than two years as Gotham's protector he knew-the more innocent they looked, the worse they were.
This part had me laughing aloud, especially when I pictured it in my head. A big man with an expensive suit squeezed into a tiny desk, eyeing a classroom full of children with his patented BatGlare.
Great story!
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And oh yes, Clark has black mail for *life* ;)
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I wrote this while I was sick and trying to be grownup about it, so I had Bruce do all the immature things I couldn't. Glad you liked it!
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And your Clark! He's so very, very patient. I love the sequence of going out to pummel the baddies because he's angry with Bruce. Bruce can be quite infuriating when he's being stubborn.
But seeing Bruce finally tell Clark why he's afraid of telling people was just too perfect. My fangirl heart melted right there. Silly, silly boy, but he does have a lot of issues with people he loves going away.
His mumbled crazy hallucinations on the roof top were hilarious. Calling Clark an evil doer had me laughing like crazy. Great work!
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And since all the comics I've read insist Dick was freakin' adorable as a child, I consider that a valid excuse to make him as cute as possible.
I figure, if Bruce beats up criminals when in a bad mood, Clark must have picked that up from him shortly after they started dating--and I'm glad the scene of sticky sentiment worked for you.
And thank you for such a nice review! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
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