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[estuve]

title: someday, you will miss me.
characters: fernando torres/sergio ramos, implied david villa/david silva. olalla dominguez.
rating: pg-13.
disclaimer: i'm lying.
word count: 2160.
notes: yeah, i just wanted to try out writing again. hahaha. don't really like this, but oh well. the idea for the villa part was taken from looking for alaska. COULD

Comments

[cricket213]

I'm so glad to see something new from you! I always enjoy reading your stuff. :)

This was so SAD! But I loved it. I liked how we got to see the circle that their relationship made. Even though it didn't really end on a happy note.

Great job!

[estuve]

THANK YOU. <3

[kissmecait17]

I am so terribly in love with this.

And Fernando still isn’t sure if it was the best or worst thing that has ever happened to him.

Well it sets it all up doesn't it? And it hurts.

“Fernando,” he says, as if he has something quite significant to say, but the affection in his voice scares Fernando so he shuts him up with another kiss.
Oh Sergio Sergio Sergio Sergio. I love Sergio here, that he so desperately wants to say something, that he spends the entire time trying to say something...

He squeezes his eyes shut when he sees the look in Sergio’s eyes. You’d have to be blind not to see it, but Fernando thinks he’d rather be the blind man than have to acknowledge something that he’s unwilling to admit is true.

I like Fernando here. Even though he is breaking my heart (And Sergio's), it's not easy for him and it's not because he wants to. He is so torn and I just ache for him.

Fernando remembers the last time even better than the first. This just feels so final. I hate that they end up so broken but that's what it's all about. I

[estuve]

i am so terribly in love w/ yr comment. ;) thank you so much.

[estuve]

thank you <3

[adorerdollylux]

there is something so poignant about the tone in which you write. i can't put my finger on it, but it always leaves me with the most beautiful ache and with the slightest bit of sweetness. this is beautiful and it hurt. you're wonderful, you know that?

[estuve]

michelle i love when you comment hahaha. IT MAKES ME FEEL GOOD. hahahha. ily so much.

[eileenyx]

Goodness, this is gorgeous. Your writing is devastating because of the restraint, delicacy, and bittersweet humor. Here, I love your Fernando with all his guilt, his failing denial when it comes to Sergio, and his inability + refusal to allow honesty between him and Sergio. Like, we get why it'd be catastrophic/hurtful rather than wonderful if they get too honest.

...tired of maybe something much deeper than that. Oh, man.

Later, when Fernando is leaving and Sergio is asleep, he whispers unspoken words into Sergio’s hair. Tender but useless and so, so sad. ;_;

“I just made some calculations, and it turns out that you’re full of shit.” Marry me, Villa.

Ahh, that drunken almost-confession! Ahh, the headband! Ahh, that text message! A circle of flail.

And Looking for Alaska?! I ♥ John Green and Paper Towns is as awesome as Looking for Alaska, I can't even-- OMG.

Anyway, thank you for this beauty. As always, I ♥ this a lot.

[estuve]

omg is it really???? i'll have to read it.

also omg ahsdlkhfashhahah i love your comment so much.

ALSO YR FIRST QUOTED LINE, that was my fav line i wrote.

thank you.