new one direction fic - zayn/liam

[estrella30]

this was supposed to be 2 or 3k of zayn and liam not knowing they're dating and turned into 8k of snarky banter and boys being dorks. I have no idea.

it is also a belated bday fic for lissa_bear so I hope you like it, lady!

thanks to harriet_vane for letting me torture her every day for the past week when I was writing this. (really, no one should have me for a

Comments

[alwayseven]

Oh my god, this is perfect. It's DELIGHTFUL and HILARIOUS and ADORABLE.

You are so good at dialogue, I laughed out loud at several points.

Thank you for this, you've made my night.

[estrella30]

haha, yay! thanks! they are just the best boys, really :D

thank you again!!

[mediaville]

Ahahaha NAN. I can't even tell you how many comments of my own I typed and then had to delete because they were like, "HAHAHAHA LOUIS YOU TROLL" and not at all relevant to grammar or sentence-structure. But really, Louis. YOU TROLL.

For example: His unwillingness to go to their last sound check in nothing but his pants. (It was chilly in the theater, and honestly, what good would it do anyone if any of them caught a cold? Not any good at all, is the answer.) When I read this I went: YES. LIAM. YOU SENSIBLE NERD.

“Well. Possibly not everyone,” Harry clarifies. “You, for example seem quite surprised by it.” LOLOLOL THIS TROPE WILL NEVER GET OLD.

“Harry did, I think. His plan was all snogging and shagging.” HARRY STYLES MAKES THE BEST PLANS, I TELL YOU.

In conclusion, I loved reading this, even though I still don't totally get the pairing, because you're hilarious and this was adorable as a fuckton of kittens. Also it gave me a reason to stop weeping about Liam/Louis and sad!Harry for a moment. Well done.

[estrella30]

LOL, SENSIBLE NERD. best thing ever ♥

thank you again for your help, lady! MWAH!

[harriet_vane]

This remains the funniest, cutest, most hilarious "don't realize they're already dating fic of my heaaaaaaaaart.

I love getting seven emails when I wake up! Feel free to do that ALWAYS. <3

[estrella30]

hahaha ilu ♥!!!!

(also, be careful with you wish for, girl. I will email you TO DEATH :D )

[estrella30]

oh wow. WOW. thank you SO MUCH for this amazing comment! it totally made sense and I really appreciate your taking the time to let me know the parts that worked for you. they are just the best, funniest, most adorable boys EVER so I'm really glad you liked it.

again, thank you so much!!

[drivetothestars]

i am an incoherent bundle of flailing and giggling right now, because this was just adorable. i loved loved loved the ot5 dynamic, and oh, louis. good old lou, thinking he was being so helpful. i might have cackled out loud at the "tea?" part, because really. your dialogue was wonderful, and oh i can just imagine this happening, with liam being clueless and zayn being clueless.

i loved this, essentially.

[estrella30]

OT5 4EVA!!!

:D

thank you so much! I really appreciate your taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot! thanks!!