Comments | estrella30: New RPS fic - JA/JP

estrella30

New RPS fic - JA/JP - Truth

Feb 12, 2006 17:56

I'm...not sure where this came from, really, but here it is *g*

Thanks to traveller for the first read through and then for the awesome beta on this. cee baby, you're my hart ♥

Title - Truth
Pairing - JA/JP
Rating - porn
Size - ~1300 words

( Truth )

jared/jensen, rps fic

Comments 116

maygra February 12 2006, 23:02:23 UTC

I did not cry, but I sniffled.

It's beautiful, Nan. But a little sad too. Sad that they have to hide it, that they choose too, that there's no choice.

And still I love it.

estrella30 February 12 2006, 23:07:11 UTC

*hugs*

its not *too* sad, but. hmm. sadder than *I* usually write, i guess.

thank you, darlin. I'm glad you liked it anyway!

*hugs again*

maygra February 12 2006, 23:25:53 UTC

no ugly blue boots for you. You get the happy people boots.

Although, you know, they might come in handy if you were say, TRAPPED in a SNOW STORM in Vancouver.

estrella30 February 12 2006, 23:34:21 UTC

heeeeeeeeee.

in that thread with you earlier then I was talking to lady_shain and we decided that neither of them ever skied much, but that jared would probably be one of those freak of nature naturals at it, even with the long legs and arms, and Jen would be horrible. tripping and irritated and jared would like, swoosh over and be like, you ok, man? and jen's like, fine. Im FINE. and jared just tugs his hat down and grins and swooshes off and Jen thinks mutinous thoughts and gives him a dirty look, and then falls on his ass in the snow.

Thread 10

ghostrunner7 February 12 2006, 23:05:01 UTC

OMGOMGOMG!!!!!

Hottest thing everOMG: "I know what you look like when you come, Jen thinks as Jared watches him. I know how your mouth tastes."

That...that just killed me.

estrella30 February 12 2006, 23:09:22 UTC

oh, YAY! thank you! that was the whole lne that started the fic, so I'm glad it especially grabbed you!

*hugs*

thanks again!

thisisbone February 12 2006, 23:17:42 UTC

Oh, so good. I like this introspective Jensen, and the way he sees Jared.

::happy sigh::

estrella30 February 12 2006, 23:19:59 UTC

oh, yay! thank you!

god, I'm, uhm, kind of in love with jensen, if you didnt know...

*whistles*

thank you!!

ghostrunner7 February 13 2006, 00:28:48 UTC

I'm sorry. Is there someone on this flist who isn't in love with Jensen? I mean, how could you not be?

estrella30 February 13 2006, 00:31:55 UTC

dude, I dont know. I honestly dont even think its a valid lifestyle choice, living acklesless. not even a little bit.

*nods seriously*

kristiinthedark February 12 2006, 23:17:52 UTC

Here is their truth. In Jensen's bed, with the sheets wrinkled and twisted beneath them. The fan is whirring overhead and dim light spills in from the hallway.

This line right here sums up why I love this so much. The imagery is just so vivid, throughout the entire thing. And did I mention that it's hot? Because it totally is.

estrella30 February 12 2006, 23:20:59 UTC

oh - thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! this one was clearer in my head than others, so I'm glad that came across for you!

thanks, baby!

stormcloude February 12 2006, 23:18:00 UTC

Jared means more than every secret Jen's ever kept; is harder to hide than every lie he's ever told.

Oh that, right there! So perfectly them.

estrella30 February 12 2006, 23:21:23 UTC

oh, yay! thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it!