FIC: Broken English - Part 7 - (Giles/Ethan) - R

[estepheia]

Ethan-ficathon Masterlist
After a long wait, here it is, the next part. Expect the next update on Friday or Saturday.

TITLE: Broken English Part 7
PAIRING: Giles/Ethan
RATING: will eventually be R
SPOILERS: Set after 8x04 The Long Way Home (comics); set in Germany, btw
PROMPT: a vacation or roadtrip, magic, slash
WRITTEN FOR:

Comments

[shapinglight]

Ooh, so glad I was online when you posted this. That was wonderful. And I knew Giles wouldn't be able to leave Ethan.

Can't tell you how much I love this story.

[estepheia]

Yay! I'm really happy you're enjoying this. I often agonize over stories while I'm writing them, which makes writing look more like self-flagellation, but this time I'm actually enjoying myself. :-)

Next chapter we'll move back to Ethan's POV. :-)

[shapinglight]

Ooh, exciting! I need to upload an Ethan icon.

[petzipellepingo]

Ooo! Clever Giles (and Ethan!). Teleporting to where...
Such a fun read.

[estepheia]

Well, I won't tell you where they'll end up, but as you can imagine, emergency teleportations aren't terribly accurate... *chuckles evilly*
Thank you for commenting, dear. Feedback is good fuel. :-)

[spikendru]

Whee! Loved Giles deciding he couldn't leave Ethan, even if they were fighting on different sides.

Loved Giles' awareness that he doesn't have the power Willow or Ethan have, and then asking for Ethan's. "Why Rupert, I thought you'd never ask..." *happy sigh*

And the Baddies getting a shot of their own karma, thanks to Andrew! *snuggles tiny, geeky Andrew*

And they teleported! W00t!

[estepheia]

I'm glad you're enjoying your fic. So far there's been a roadtrip and magic. Time for me to move on to the third item on your wish list. :-)

So, you like Andrew's little "contingency spell", yes? Hee. *chuckles*

[philips]

And then, of course, like in a big budget action movie, everything happens at once:

The way this was written, I could almost hear the soundtrack. Very cool.

I like the equal parts concern and annoyance that make up Giles' thoughts on Ethan. And that I barely know anything about Michael and yet can still see him clearly. Very exciting all around and I'm looking forward to next week!

[estepheia]

Thank you for being so dilligent about leaving feedback. :-) It's really useful to know whether the more complicated sections work, like e.g. describing events that happen simultaneously.
I'm glad you're still enjoying this.

[estepheia]

Why, thanks! I didn't even know you were reading this. :-)