FIC: Broken English - Part 4 (Ethan/Giles) - R

[estepheia]

My Ethan-ficathon story finally continues...
Only a very short update today, more a teaser than an actual chapter, but I wanted to let you know that I haven't abandoned this story, even if I posted a Spander fic yesterday.... Anyway, the next chapter is almost finished. If only I could stop tinkering... Hee.
Ethan-ficathon Masterlist
TITLE: Broken

Comments

[petzipellepingo]

Ack! You are evil! Will our heroes make it out in more or less one piece?
Btw, Ethan gropes around for the lashinig tendrils of power should be "lashing".

[estepheia]

Ack! You are evil!
I knoooow. Heee.
Sorry, I couldn't resist posting this cliffhanger. *cackles*

Thank you for the pimp in your LJ and for leaving feedback. *smooch*

[philips]

Aaargh!
But that wreck was incredibly well written. The motion of it all really captured me.
Thank you for promising more though.

[estepheia]

Thank you.
Tomorrow hubby will take the kids to dance practice. And I will finish that chapter. *looks determined*

[pinkdormouse]

And ouch again.

[estepheia]

*cackles evilly*

[spikendru]

Oooo! Love the cliffhanger! And it's even more exciting stopping here with more to come than if this was a whole chapter. The wreck is just . . . so visceral and immediate; the reader is grabbed and shaken and feels every moment of the experience. Well done!

But, ohmigod! The ending! [Ethan]feels a small stab of pain as the bright spark of a nearby life force is snuffed out, and then... Please tell me they hit a deer or something! Giles is not dead! Ethan is not dead! Neither Giles or Ethan are dead! La la la. EthanandGilesandSnapearenotdead. La la la.

[estepheia]

Bwaahaaa, your feedback is adorable. YOU are adorable.
*smooches you*
Would Estepheia kill off a character you care for in a fic written for you? Would she do that to you? Well?

Heee.

[antennapedia]

Aaaaaaaaah!

Love the writing of the accident-- it's the sort of thing that present tense really works for, all rushy and immediate and ooooof. And I'm with spikendru-- no no no no no none of these people are dead.

Glad you're continuing soon!

[estepheia]

Heee.
Dead? Well, we'll soon see, won't we. *cackles*
Thank you for reading and commenting.