New OT4 Story: Lucky (NC-17) for JFlan's Birthday (oh so late)

[esteefee]

omg, I meant to write this two weeks ago. Sorry, Joe! (Not that you read polyamorous teamfic!)

Author: esteefee
Pairing: OT4
Rating: NC-17
Words: 3,601
Spoilers: none
Warnings: Very, very light dub-con while John figures things out.
Categories: post-series
Summary: Sometimes you just get so damned lucky.
A/N: This is a prequel to The Gods Must Be Crazy.

Comments

[mezzo_cammin]

Parts! Parts!

I'm a pudding cup!

These words will forevermore be my favorite John words.

This was wonderful, and lush, and hotter than hell, and a little heart-achy, in the good way, because John just needed this so much, and I'm so glad they gave it to him. But good. ;o)

*happy sigh*

[esteefee]

\o/

he IS a pudding cup. srsly.

I can just see his poor little drunken face. but there are all these parts? and. he gets confused. :)))))

[mezzo_cammin]

And what a perfect icon for that look!!

(by the way, I've been meaning to say - I love your journal new header, I truly do.)

[esteefee]

awwww, thank you! I am not so good with the photoshop but I worked very hard at it.

and yes, buh? his birthday hooch was 2000-proof, so no surprise it worked!

[almostnever]

I love how dorky and inhibited John is for a lot of this, and how his feelings for the team carry him through and convince him to let them go ahead and treat him like a pudding cup *g* Definitely a lucky man!

[esteefee]

yes, the inspiring image for this piece? John trying to hang on to his stripey boxers. DORK!

he is so, so lucky to have a team that loves him. srsly.

[gaffsie]

John gets all the best presents.

Some time between John’s blink and nod this had turned into 70s night, Ice Storm-style.

Best analogy ever.

[esteefee]

\o/ he does, doesn't he? happy birthday boy!

[bironic]

Mm, this is tasty. I like the smoldering orgy the tent becomes, and John's pickled brain turning to arousal.

You might want to put a light dubcon warning up top? There are several moments here where John tightens with indecision and things seem like they might tip over into something he's very much uncomfortable with, while his team pressures him. It turns out all right, but that tension is still very much there in the beginning.

[esteefee]

done, thank you! I've also made a slight change, because that wasn't exactly my intent; I had Ronon ease up, but I didn't have him verbalize what he was thinking, so I added words.

[gottalovev]

I absolutely love how dorky John is in this, poor darling, afraid of too many parts and being a pudding cup. But I also love how everyone just roll with it and gently coax him into it, the love how they were just waiting for him. a nice feel good story =D

[esteefee]

\dorky!John/ thanks, sweetheart!