New H50 Story: 'Olu'olu (Steve/Danno)

Dec 12, 2010 16:39

This is all sheafrotherdon's fault.

Title: 'Olu'olu
Author: esteefee
Fandom: H50
Pairing: Steve/Danno
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 1,340
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Categories: First Time, PWP
Beta: sheafrotherdon
Summary: Steve is rude. Danny teaches him some manners.
A/N: For Cates!

'Olu'olu )

h50, fiction, steve/danno

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Comments 75

sheafrotherdon December 13 2010, 00:47:08 UTC
this:

“Hey, at least I’m wearing a tie.” Danny’s having too much fun now, because the big veins in Steve’s neck are threatening to blow.

is just it, them, totally, completely, and utterly. They *love* pushing each other's buttons, and oh my god, I loved seeing inside Danny's head, how he's doing it so deliberately, and how well it all works out :D I love that he loses his cool when Steve goes ahead and asks for what he wants, and then gets it back enough to make poor Steve say please :D sjadfhlkasdhf and oh, Steve's face wide open at the end *MASHES THEM* asjdfhlas :D

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esteefee December 13 2010, 00:50:48 UTC
you! you give such good beta babe...wouldn't want to miss that opportunity. *smishes* thank you so so much!!!

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sheafrotherdon December 13 2010, 00:51:22 UTC
asdkfhlaf look at Steve's hearts in his eyes in your icon!!

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esteefee December 13 2010, 01:04:18 UTC
and in yours!! ♥ ♥

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dogeared December 13 2010, 00:51:01 UTC
asd;fasdlfkj oh oh oh, this is just hot like burning, oh, and wee Steve's wide open face, adsf;alsdfkj meep, AND you have amazing Steve voice!! I can absolutely hear him saying “Thanks. That was something else.” EEEE YAY I'M GLAD YOU'RE HERE! :D

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esteefee December 13 2010, 01:06:06 UTC
omg ::licks neck-of-steve::

thank you sweetheart! *smishes you*

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lamardeuse December 13 2010, 00:59:12 UTC
*melts into a puddle of happy goo*

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esteefee December 13 2010, 01:07:32 UTC
hello puddly 'deuse! *unsmish*

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siriaeve December 13 2010, 01:06:55 UTC
akhgkajgh BWEE \o/

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esteefee December 13 2010, 01:08:18 UTC
heee. Cates hax cultified us!

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siriaeve December 13 2010, 01:17:35 UTC
She has powers! trinityofone just succumbed. I think that's earned Cate a blender.

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esteefee December 13 2010, 01:28:11 UTC
omg!! must go see. and yeah, an espresso machine too!

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beledibabe December 13 2010, 01:09:41 UTC
Oh, those *guys*!

This was deliciously and delightfully hot!

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esteefee December 13 2010, 01:15:55 UTC
thank you kindly!

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