It's not bad at all. You made a few statements that weren't backed up with quotes or whatnot, and a typo or two, but otherwise I don't see anything wrong with it. I understood what you were getting at and can't find much fault with it. :)
You should really pay attention to what Jordan says. When most profs see a statement of fact that isn't immediately followed by a quote, they look at it as though you really haven't said anything at all. It can be a great point to bring up, but they have to disregard it if it isn't backed up. This is especially true in History. Think about that for next time I guess.
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