I have read your whole epic masterpiece right up to date now and every time I read a portion, either the older stuff that I read so long after it was posted or the hot off the presses stuff like this, there always seems to be a reason why I'm not going to comment yet...usually incoherence and awe play a big part of it. I really do want to go back and comment to so much of your story but for now, I'm going to make myself babble nonsensically and incoherently here, right in the moment when I have just finished reading this instalment for the first of what will be a great many times because I really want you guys to know just how fucking brilliant the two of you are, if for some reason you don't know that already.
Now Billie's voice is shaking too, hugging Mike back so tightly it'd be small fucking surprise if someone's ribs cracked, but Mike needs to understand that he is not one of Billie's many mistakes, that he may in fact be the only thing Billie's ever managed to get right.
Enough talk, dammit. Now they need bed. There are certain things that can only be said from skin to naked skin.
His other hand cups Billie’s hip, moving the singer over to straddle his hips, bringing Billie close for a kiss, loving the feeling of being covered in nothing but skin that’s not his.
Just...gah. There are no words. Those three parts, along with numerous others, just broke me completely. You had me shivering there, ladies. And then the ending...I'm just mentally flailing here. There have been so many times during the reading of this epic where I've thought this but this one takes the cake and I really want you to know that this is some of the finest writing I've read ever, not just in fandom but anywhere, published or otherwise.
/end giddy rambling fan girl babble. I'll try and be more coherent next time. I'm not sure how much you have left of this or how you're going to wrap this all up, but I'm very much looking forward to anything that you guys write. Bravo.
EE! What a wonderful thing to come wake up to in the morning, oh wow. *hugs you to pieces* Thank you for taking the time to come and leave a comment, honey. We always really appreciate it and wow...shit, I'm glad you liked it so much!
*smiles* We worked really hard on the whole storyline, but I'm glad you liked the most recent installment; it was something we absolutely grilled ourselves over to get right and I'm SO glad that's coming through in your reading.
(Your incoherency is pretty flattering in and of itself dear. No worries at all. And THANK YOU! Again! *mwuah*)
Now Billie's voice is shaking too, hugging Mike back so tightly it'd be small fucking surprise if someone's ribs cracked, but Mike needs to understand that he is not one of Billie's many mistakes, that he may in fact be the only thing Billie's ever managed to get right.
Enough talk, dammit. Now they need bed. There are certain things that can only be said from skin to naked skin.
His other hand cups Billie’s hip, moving the singer over to straddle his hips, bringing Billie close for a kiss, loving the feeling of being covered in nothing but skin that’s not his.
Just...gah. There are no words. Those three parts, along with numerous others, just broke me completely. You had me shivering there, ladies. And then the ending...I'm just mentally flailing here. There have been so many times during the reading of this epic where I've thought this but this one takes the cake and I really want you to know that this is some of the finest writing I've read ever, not just in fandom but anywhere, published or otherwise.
/end giddy rambling fan girl babble. I'll try and be more coherent next time. I'm not sure how much you have left of this or how you're going to wrap this all up, but I'm very much looking forward to anything that you guys write. Bravo.
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*smiles* We worked really hard on the whole storyline, but I'm glad you liked the most recent installment; it was something we absolutely grilled ourselves over to get right and I'm SO glad that's coming through in your reading.
(Your incoherency is pretty flattering in and of itself dear. No worries at all. And THANK YOU! Again! *mwuah*)
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