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[Bleach] :: fanfiction.

Jul 11, 2010 15:51

Title: Starry Night
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Kurosaki Ichigo x Ishida Uryu
Rating/Warning/Word count: Nc-17/Frotting/ 1,011
Disclaimer: I do not own, nor do I make profit from Bleach
Summary: Kurosaki and Ishida meet up in the park.
Notes: for citrus_taste summer challenge. Comments and con-crit are appreciated.

( Starry Night )

c: ishida uryu, c: kurosaki ichigo, fic, s: bleach, com: citrus_taste (summer)

Comments 13

nochick_fics July 12 2010, 03:58:25 UTC

I'm usually not one for concrit, but BECAUSE I really liked this (which means I actually care <3), can I just say that the ending felt a bit short... almost abrupt. Something like a parting line or thought would have wrapped this up perfectly.

But anyway, as I said, I really did like this, so much it's going in my memories. It was quite sensual- a word I don't throw around often. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this!

espial July 12 2010, 16:41:54 UTC

Thank you very much. I tried a couple of different things but none of them really worked for me. I am working on making transitions/endings a bit smoother, so thanks for the suggestion.

I'm glad that you like it. And thank you, I really appreciate it.

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espial July 12 2010, 16:45:51 UTC

I'll write more IchiIshi for citrus_taste, they lend themselves very well to the prompts. Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it. :)

nehalenia July 12 2010, 07:11:48 UTC

This was delicious! It's an extremely sensuous piece, from the kiss that tastes like cherry soda, the heat, and the sweat. Really nice and tingly PWP for this pairing. I definitely would have read more. :D

espial July 12 2010, 17:47:11 UTC

:) Thank you so very much! I'm glad that you like it. I really should work on my word count huh? >.>

bakayaromaniac July 12 2010, 11:55:21 UTC

Comments above pretty much covers my thoughts.
<3

espial July 12 2010, 17:47:25 UTC

Thank you. :)

♥

shirukukage July 12 2010, 14:18:36 UTC

I agree with all the comments above it was hot and delicious, I truly enjoyed it! I only wish it was longer because I'd love to have read more.
On an unrelated note I just wanted to compliment you and the others who've left comments on your icons they're so great I'm jealous. :)

espial July 12 2010, 17:49:44 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it. I guess I really should work on my word count huh?

Lol, I wish I had the talent to make icons. I normally get them from icon communities. :)