Hornblower Alphabet Soup 2010 Entry

Jan 22, 2010 08:45

Written for Lokei's alphabet soup challenge, rated G.

H is for Half Pay )

fan fiction, hornblower

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gayalondiel January 22 2010, 09:50:07 UTC
What a lovely AU! I love the picture of the two men marking time together, it's beautifully written.

:)

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esmerelda_t January 22 2010, 21:53:20 UTC
Thanks!

the picture of the two men marking time together

Bet they were demented with each other before the month was out. :)

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gayalondiel January 23 2010, 20:53:39 UTC
Bet they were demented with each other before the month was out. :)

You just talked yourself into writing a sequel, I want to read that. Please? :D

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esmerelda_t January 24 2010, 11:38:41 UTC
Tempting. :) I'd like to do more with this scenario but we shall have to wait and see what time and ideas allows.

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mylodon January 22 2010, 12:19:32 UTC
Another great take on things. Not how I'd ever have imagined it happening, but it could have done so.

Dark and delicious, like the only really edible chocolate!

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esmerelda_t January 22 2010, 21:54:06 UTC
This was my attempt at fluff! :P

Thanks!

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anteros_lmc January 22 2010, 20:09:45 UTC
I've been dying to read this all day and have been too busy to get near it till now. It's wonderful. You're a genius. For me, this is up there with Miss Kittie's canon. I adore AUs where Archie and Horatio get to stay together and Horatio tells Pellew where to get off.

He had declined Pellew’s offer. He would rather rot on half pay with Archie than command the finest ship of the line without him.
Oh yes. This is exactly how it should be.

Thank you so much.

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esmerelda_t January 22 2010, 21:56:06 UTC
I'm blushing; high praise indeed.

A ship of the line doesn't keep you warm at night, although most likely Archie hogs the blanket so he's not kept warm at night anway, but you know what I mean.

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anteros_lmc January 22 2010, 22:11:31 UTC
high praise indeed
Not kidding sweetie. This pushes all the right buttons for me.

most likely Archie hogs the blanket
Aye, but only to get Horatio to snuggle closer ;)

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esmerelda_t January 22 2010, 22:14:46 UTC
This pushes all the right buttons for me.

If only there'd been some way to work in fish... :P

but only to get Horatio to snuggle closer

He's a Machiavellian genius!

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muddlingalong January 24 2010, 08:40:23 UTC
This is lovely, how it should have been. Its nice seeing them kinda cute and domestic like this.

I love how Archie knows and understands, even though Horatio didn't tell him, and says what Horatio needs to hear.

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esmerelda_t January 24 2010, 11:39:34 UTC
Thanks. :)

I love how Archie knows and understands

I don't think much gets past Archie.

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lokei January 25 2010, 01:58:19 UTC
A fascinating alternate look at how things might have gone! Thanks for writing!

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esmerelda_t January 25 2010, 10:55:56 UTC
Thanks for organising! I'm looking forward to getting a free couple of hours to read through everyone's enteries.

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