Comments | escritoireazul: Glee fic: Stray Too Far, Quinn (Lauren/Puck, Mercedes, Wes, David) (marching band au)

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Glee fic: Stray Too Far, Quinn (Lauren/Puck, Mercedes, Wes, David) (marching band au)

May 02, 2011 22:04

Title: Stray Too Far
Author: escritoireazul
Written for: sotto_voice
Author's note: This is a transformative work of fiction for the television show Glee. It is also a marching band au in which New Directions and Warblers are all in the marching band at McKinley.
Series: Story Three of The Marching Band Refused to Yield: (1) Burn This Town Down Tonight ( ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

jailynn24 May 3 2011, 12:19:02 UTC

This was such an intense chapter. My heart broke for Quinn and while I hate that she turned her back on Lauren, I completely understand. I can't wait to see where these friends go from here. :)

escritoireazul May 6 2011, 00:45:29 UTC

I need to figure out how to fix the friendship, because writing this broke my heart. I did not anticipate this series being quite so angsty, but I should have!

I'm really glad the intensity came through, and that your heart broke over Quinn. Poor Quinn, she's had such a rough time of it, and she just won't let people in. I hurt for her.

dropsofviolet May 4 2011, 13:27:18 UTC

Quinn. ;; This was really emotionally intense and you really brought us into her head really well. I also really liked your descriptions - I could practically taste that smoothie.

Also: Quinn, Wes, and David as drum majors is WIN.

escritoireazul May 6 2011, 00:48:16 UTC

Thank you so much! I really loved getting into Quinn's head -- well, loved may not be exactly the right word, considering how painful it was, but close enough -- and I am glad the emotional intensity came through. It was heartbreaking to write, for sure.

I LOVE Quinn, Wes, and David as drum majors. I'm glad you do too.

Thank you for this awesome feedback!

funkyinfishnet May 4 2011, 15:12:16 UTC

Oh this completely broke me. I am so sad and upset for Lauren and for Quinn. I really hope that they can find each other again and talk properly and that Quinn will listen. So sad :(

escritoireazul May 6 2011, 00:50:24 UTC

Thank you so much for this feedback! It broke my heart writing it, so I am very glad to know that the heartbreak and intensity came through in the writing. I love their friendship, and can't wait to write them working through this.