Title: Love is a Painful Thing (The Second Best Mix)
Author: Carla (
escritoireazul)
Disclaimer: None of the characters are mine.
Rating: 14+
Author’s Note: Written for
pene for
femslash08, and late because I am an idiot who forgot she no longer lives in the eastern time zone.
Summary: You love her beyond the telling of it, but she’s not for you. Until the one time she is.
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Love is a Painful Thing (The Second Best Mix) )
Comments 14
The fic as a whole is so many things I love - sad and physical, self aware and brilliant and full of beautiful girls.
Your Dawn is beautiful, just wanting to be real and valuable; understanding the frustration of always being second and understanding the strength in Faith. I especially love this: Faith watched her, quiet and steady. and the flow on from that, Faith's hands on Dawn, how Faith lets Dawn lead ( ... )
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I think I may have to write another Bee/Viola story once I buy She's the Man. Serendipitously, I watched it for the first time right before the assignments went out, but I'd love to really analyze it and Sisterhood and then write another story between them, because theirs is a footie love which makes me happy. (Quite like Bend It Like Beckham makes me happy.)
I was really luck with this assignment, and again I'm so glad you like the story!
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The Faith/Dawn really hit my buttons, made me miss the Buffyverse girls so much. Your Dawn and Faith are different than I've read before, but in a good way that is very them. I love the idea of Faith listening and that she's not in it for anything so that when something happens, she can still go right back to listening. And Dawn. Dawn! She's so perfect in this I don't even know what to say.
The Viola/Bridget makes me happy, because I was hoping whoever got this request would write it.
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It was a stroke of luck that I watched She's the Man for the first time right before the assignments went out. I was leery about writing it after just one viewing and without the source material at hand, but I'm glad I did, and I think I want to write them again.
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Dawn/Faith has never really appealed to me, but I'm so glad I read this one, because it was perfect. Dawn with her "I'm a woman," and Faith just accepting that. They were right for each other, and I'm really glad Dawn was the one to make the first move, not Faith. I love that they are comfortable with each other and your Faith is so calm and collected yet she's that in a very Faith-like way, it just makes me want to squee ( ... )
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I'm glad the Dawn/Faith worked for you here. I'm not a huge fan of Dawn/Faith, either, even though I like Dawn's character, and I adore Faith (and love her with just about anyone). It was a challenge to write them together, but fun, too.
Eden pining after Anne Marie and not getting her may be my favorite story to tell. I've long wanted to write a story about Eden turning to Penny (in a few years, when she's older) to replace Anne Marie, which is fucked up in so many ways, but I was really pleased with way her turning to Lena worked out in the story ( ... )
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I'd know your stories anywhere, you know. They just scream you :)
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I love writing Stick It fic. I'm going to have to do it more often.
Thank you!
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