Comments | escapismrocks: (без темы)

escapismrocks

(Untitled)

Mar 28, 2008 03:08

This is a story about love. It is not necessarily a happy story, nor is it necessarily a sad one. It is about a love that would stand the test of time, overcome hurdles no party ever expected but above all it as about the extraordinary circumstances that brought two people back together.

Our story begins over three decades ago when a young woman, ( Read more... )

shipper: derek/addison, prompt wednesday

Comments 10

xyliette March 28 2008, 04:24:34 UTC

At the risk of being all, you know what I love, even though you do- I don't think I mentioned how well this flowed...and I was really curious as to what this was for and now it makes sense. Prompt? I love when I don't pay attention and have no idea what is going on.

Plus, I really think you should play with the whole notion of the narrator more often, it was lovely. :)

escapismrocks March 28 2008, 22:48:35 UTC

I was considering do a whole fic narrator style, but I dont think I could keep it up. I have to think lots, and thats never good.

pickleminded07 March 28 2008, 07:51:35 UTC

What a nice fairy tale. I even had a Disney type narrator's voice reading it to me in my head. :)

escapismrocks March 28 2008, 22:49:34 UTC

I had the disney style narrator when I wrote it, so I'm glad that transpired. They are kind of perfect for a fairy tale, if you twist the ending a little bit.

troatie March 28 2008, 10:47:48 UTC

This may just be my favorite Addek oneshot ever. It flowed wonderfully and it was just the perfect amount of fluff without being too fluffy. Just perfect. I loved it &hearts

escapismrocks March 28 2008, 22:50:43 UTC

Favorite ever? *blushes* I seem to be spewing fluff of late, where has the sarcasm gone??? I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh and Happy Birthday!

kedda March 28 2008, 20:39:03 UTC

In my head, Addison's reaction to Annabelle saying "I'm your daughter" was "Fuck Annabelle. Fuck."

escapismrocks March 28 2008, 22:52:01 UTC

Yeah, I think mentally she's screaming at her, either that or maybe "Shut Up. Shut Up. Shut Up"

crazychica802 March 29 2008, 13:58:48 UTC

Annabelle is so an Addison type personality, the way she stuck her hand at Derek and was like, "hi I'm your daughter" was so what Addie did to Mer when she made her infamous entrance into Seattle, but I think you already knew that since you prob meant to write it like that. :P

I had that movie trailer guy's voice as the narrator in my head when I read it, but now after reading some of the comments I can completely picture it being like Julie Andrews or something.