DIvergence: Chapter Forty-Two

[escapes]

Divergence

Author: Escapes Rating: Just to be safe, NC 17 Pairing: Luke/Noah

Spoiler/Warning: Spoilers up through the enlistment story arc and forward/ Warnings: M/M , Language

Disclaimer: Characters belong to ATWT, P&G, CBS, etc. I'm not making money from this, don't sue, etc.

Summary: *new and improved* This is Luke and Noah’s storyline the way

Comments

squee

[passionate_hope]

yay a new chapter. it's nice to see how it all comes together. Noah worrying about Luke after the head injury awwww. I love snarky luke lol Noah should know he's okay if he is joking like that hehe. Their texts are always fun glad you are dusing them again :) and that note on Luke's car uh oh. JEff and Noah are always hilarious i love the nicknames too and Jeff being Luke's favorite barista will never get old lol great chapter Dani glad you're back and thanks for the shout out

Re: squee

[escapes]

Thanks, Hon! I enjoy seeing your reactions as I'm writing it and you letting me know what works and what doesn't. =)

I'm glad I can do the text messages and emails again, now that I've found a photo program I can live with.

Jeff and Noah are a blast to write. I was actually laughing out loud when i was writing that scene, it was so clear in my head.

[flytalian]

OMG YES! This is the best thing ever (yes - both you being back and this chapter!).
Off to read - so on fangirl mode already! ♥

[flytalian]

Sorry for being late with comments, busy days!

My, Jeff's death scene was hilarious! I can so see him doing that! And his bantering with Noah - just awesome! Wish we could get to see more of them on the show, I love those two! [side note: thank goodnees there's Dani ;)]

Love the back-and-forth between the boys two, first with the questioning (gosh - Luke was so Luke!!!) and then via text. You write them so wonderfully! Thanks for this series, D, and I'm so glad you're back ♥

(Yay for writing-full holidays! How was your vaca?)

[escapes]

LOL, I loved writing that scene, Jeff comes through in my head really clear a lot of the time. He's fun to have hijack your brain. I agree, we totally need more Jeff and Noah on the show. Or heck, just Noah at this point.

hee, I'm glad you thought Luke was very Luke. I was trying to channel the Snyder Snark, Im glad it seems to have worked.

Vacation was good, the weather was kinda crappy, rained a little almost every day, but it was great for writing.

[escapes]

LOL, I love that I get a reaction like that, without you even reading it. \o/

And you in fangirl mode cracks me up. =)

[annelyna]

You know, I was actually thinking the other day to send you an email and ask where the next update was :) Guess I didn't know.. so first things first, YAY for the update :)

and one thing I noticed that you can be funny sometimes, because I loved the beginning of this story, so funny! not to mention the nicknames and the text too..

A little scared about the note that was left, hoping nothing will come to harm with Luke.. Thanks for the update!!

[escapes]

I know, it was a while between updates. i'm sorry about that. I was sick for three solid months and though I got a chapter out in there, I was too wiped to concentrate. I seem to have thrown it, so that's good. I got a lot of writing done on my vacation as well, which is even better. \o/

I'm glad you like the humour. I aim to give the boys full lives with friends and coworkers and classmates. I understand why the show can't do it, but I don't have to pay for actors, so that works in my favour.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it so much!

[amerinengland]

This has to be one of my all-time favorie Nuke stories, so I'm so glad to see it continue!

Great job, I love their insane love for each other that just radiates off the page!

Your storyline is so much better, and a heck of a lot more believable at times, than the cannon! I can't wait to read more!

[escapes]

Awww,thank you! I'm glad I'm in your favourite Nuke stories. =)

I'm glad you can feel the love between them, it means I'm doing my job right.

And that comment about my storyline being better and more believable than canon made my day. Thank you!

[sweetiejelly]

Dani! Thank you so much! *hugs* I can't wait to read this tonight. This series always brings a smile to my face. Thanks in advance for another chapter. ♥ Will be back. :)

ETA: Oh Luke. :( Poor baby. I'm glad Noah was there to take care of him a bit. But I'm worried about the threat on his car. One thing I love about this series is that there's always this balance of fun and serious. I wish the show was like this. And Jeffrey! Hee. Love Noah's relationship with him. Thanks again, Dani. And good to see you back. I hope you're feeling better too. ♥

[escapes]

You're welcome, hon! I hope you had a great birthday.

I'm glad you think there is a good mix of fun and serious. I know some people may think that the story is not moving fast enough, but everything I'm doing now is setting things up for latter, some in this arc and some way in the future if I need them.

I am feeling better, still working on 100% but it's getting there.