The Kid Was Alright But It Went To His Head

[erstwhiled]

Title: The Kid Was Alright But It Went To His Head
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Word Count: 1,699
Rating: PG-15
Warning: (Non-graphic) sexual situations, beer and banter. 
Disclaimer: Not mine, very much not mine.
Summary: "Too much tongue? How would you know? It's never been in your mouth!" (Kink Meme fill for this prompt in which Harry and Louis

Comments

[intherubble]

I didn't enjoy this fic at all.

APRIL FOOLS!!!!!

AHSAHAHA hialrious.

YOU CONTINUE TO JUST BASICALLY TAKE ALL OF MY FAVORITE THINGS AND MAKE THEM INTO FICS. YOU SHOULD HBE CAREFUL OR YOU MIGHT END UP IN MY CAGE

ughugughgh their banter ta the beginning is so gr9 and them. LOUIS GOING FOR THE BOOBIES TOO SOON I appreciated how this was extentended through the piece, from a literary stand point.

and nooooooises. the way louis asks harry what theyre doing but the answer doesn't really matter becaise they both already know.

I LIKE THAT ALL YOUR FICS SEEM TO INCLUDE GRINDING ON COUCHES A+ mmmm dirty sloppy kissing

IDK WHAT ELSE TO SAY OTHER THAN U R PURFECT 2 ME

[erstwhiled]

you're such a dork, omg.

your sinister fic writer cage is not a place i want to be kept, i am a free range author tyvm.

harry doesn't have a boobie vibe, idk why lou went for the boob grab.

grinding on couches is just so nice tbh, coming in your pants is more appealing when you share it with someone.

xx

[crackvanek]

loved this! thanks for filling the prompt

[erstwhiled]

thank you, it was my pleasure.

[singcynsing]

YES this was brilliant and hot and WOW

[erstwhiled]

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

[mentalistecbm]

this is fantastic.

[erstwhiled]

ohh italics, thank you so much! :D

[janeausten4ever]

"Told you, you went for the boobs too early. I don’t even have them and you went for them."

ZOMG ^THIS! Their banter, and their sighs and groans and just Harry-and-Louis-ness made. My. Day.

THIS FIC!

[erstwhiled]

thank you! their banter was quite fun to write, and lou's just quite handsy tbh.

i'm happy you liked it :)