Let Lips Do What Hands Do 6/10

Mar 31, 2012 16:25

Title: Let Lips Do What Hands Do
Chapter: 6/10
Pairing: Liam/Zayn
Word Count: 4,840
Rating: PG-13 (this chapter)
Warning: Just some drunk teenagers but otherwise nothing of note.
Disclaimer: Not mine, oh, but how I wish they were.
Summary: You're not supposed to fall in love with students, it's unethical or something.

Chapter Six )

pairing: liam/zayn, fandom: one direction

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shoreparty March 18 2012, 05:51:53 UTC
oh god. it's nearly 2 am and I'm reading this for like the fifth time.
I adore jealous!Liam and asfkgjklgk; he had tears in his eyes when he thought Zayn was finishing with him...? Oh, boys.

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erstwhiled March 18 2012, 06:17:08 UTC
omg, five times, stop omg.

they're just the tiniest bit in love and it's so new, and as confident as liam is he's still a bit insecure and just lskjgh;sa i have too many feelings about my boys tbh.

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shoreparty March 18 2012, 15:17:24 UTC
Hahahaha *facedesk* I also printed this entire story out and read it OVER AND OVER during my vacation in nyc this week. I think the girl beside me on the bus was like why are you smiling and giggling so much and i was just like shush ziam is reallllll.

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erstwhiled March 19 2012, 06:19:07 UTC
you printed. it. out.

omg

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intherubble March 18 2012, 07:23:29 UTC
first of all I'd like to say that no matter how long you say the chapter is I'm always nervously watching the scroll bar like NO WHY IS THERE SO LITTLE SPACE LEFT

CHEEKY LIAM TEXTS IN CLASS WERE EVEN BETTER THAN I IMAGINED. I love how it doesn't come off like he's trying to be coy, just upfront and earnest. and ugggh Zayn thinking about the bruise WHICH LIAM TOTALLY DID ON PURPOSE and Zayn probably guiltily wanked over that picture later.

& BOYFRAAAAAAAANDS <333

drunkenly winding up on a random street corner after a party goes south is so perfectly/painfully high school. I WANT TO KNOW HOW LIAM EXPLAINS HAVING ZAYN'S NUMBER/ HIM PICKING THEM UP.

secret car kissing is almost as good as couch make outs so it's ok.

ALL OF THE AU'S PLS

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erstwhiled March 18 2012, 07:40:15 UTC
omg i actually wait with bated breath for your comments tbh. they make me so happy.

ofc liam showed him the bruise on purpose, but gurl there was nothing guilty about that wank tbh, they both knew exactly what was going to happen when liam sent him that picture. omg boyfriends just sort of happened accidentally but i couldn't take it out.

lbr niall is going to have no clue how they got home. ughh secret car kissing, pls. it's so clandestine.

you will get all of the au's, don't fret.

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intherubble March 18 2012, 08:30:27 UTC
okay deliberate jerking off might be even better if they know the other one's doing it too.

NIALL WON'T BUT HARRY WAS TOTES COGNIZANT, you already know my feels re: harry finding out about their relationship.

I had something else to say but forgot. I'll probably remember and put in your askbox.

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erstwhiled March 18 2012, 09:17:02 UTC
high-fives bc liam's using his penis

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laakea March 18 2012, 07:34:01 UTC
I love your writing. I didn't want to read this story because of the whole teacher student thing but after I read your art model story I couldn't help myself. I'm glad I did. I love this story. You're such a good writer. Liam is so adorable in this. I can't wait to read more of your writing.

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erstwhiled March 18 2012, 07:43:24 UTC
thank you, that's sweet.

i can completely understand how a teacher/student fic could put people off, it's a touchy subject, not everyone is comfortable with it. but i'm so happy you decided to try it, and like it!

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erstwhiled March 18 2012, 09:26:41 UTC
thank you so much :D

liam is quite irresistible, and tbh breaking of one's rules is acceptable if it's for reassurance purposes.

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erstwhiled March 19 2012, 06:21:15 UTC
:D omg

i believe it's the teacher in him that's coming out there, oh tomorrow shall be fun, i can tell you that.

x

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