Now I've brought it upon myself. Beware.
The first TEN people to comment in this post or in future, get to request that I write a drabble short text of any pairing/character of their choosing.* In return, they have to post this in their journal, regardless of their ability level (yes, even if it's as low as mine)
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First of all, Arthur's POV is just marvellous; very kingly, depressed and resigned, it'd seem; that he sees what's happening between Guin and Lancelot, and the way he describes it is very poignant; and the line with ash simply gripped my heart.
And then the horses! I might have mentioned it before, but I love horses- in every form, be it in real life or in literature- and so every mention is very dear to me. The way you describe how breathless and exhilarated they are, with the fresh air and exercise and wind- and temporary freedom of the courts of Camelot... Well, I simply adored that passage!
I also very much liked the parallel between the first and second half; first mentions of how Arthur can't fan the sparks into flame in Guinevere, and then about the "fire cracking in your [Lancelot's] veins". Nice touch :)
And that Arthur would call himself a sinner unable to enter Heaven... well, it seems very in-character to me. So, I congratulate you on a job well-done and thank you for fulfilling my prompt.
(now if only I could make myself write and post this meme on my LJ...)
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Ha! You like horses! Now who could foresee that? ^^ I threw them in simply for their dynamism; it's great to know they turn out to be a welcomed bonus :D
I know I'm still to do your second request, but I can't wait for you to post this meme! In the magic 'after the session' time, perhaps? *nudges gently*
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W skrócie, możesz mnie zepchnąć z krzesła, a i tak nie zadziała :P
Okay, tak na serio: mam nadzieję, że niedługo będę mogła zamieścić to meme; boję się po prostu, że ludzie będą mieli świetne prompty, które zdominują moje plot bunnies. A ja naprawdę muszę skończyć w końcu fik z Incepcji. To wstyd, że dziewczyna, która zapłaciła za moje usługi, musi tyle czekać. *shamefaced*
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Oesuu, nie ogarniam ilości komentarzy pod tym biednym postem...
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That sounds so wrong :P But I'll do my best to follow your sage advice. "Henri, sweetheart, come here please!"
(Disclaimer: You take all the blame when M. receives him back with a bunch of bunny-kids).
dwa razy tyle
Ai, don't tempt me, hun. What you just said is so fundamentally wrong I can't even begin to comprehend it. Waiting and postponing things is not to be encouraged! And I've been asking around for a solid kick recently, too! All this is ruined now!
*laments and wails*
;P
Oesuu, nie ogarniam ilości komentarzy pod tym biednym postem...
Lol! This is what popularity feels like ;)
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You're right, procrastination is wrong to the core; but I wasn't talking about postponing things, only about taking your time to finish them off till they're sheer masterpieces. Doing things in a hurry is just as wrong as doing them too lazily.
I could kick you, but that would do you no good. Ask my sis ;)
Orly? Then popularity is sort of intimidating. I feel bad about spamming my own journal! But then again, I would feel equally bad for not responding to all these awesome comments.
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I know what you were talking about. But I'm desperate enough to grasp at straws, so my liberal muse decided to interpret it as it suited him (yeah, it's a he) best.
Oh, but the sis situation only recommends you; you have experience ;P
Don't feel bad. It's my fault anyway; I have been hijaking comment threads for five years now. I'm just bad like that.
And it's a vicious circle; both sides keep responding.
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Your muse is a he! Now that explains a lot. They tend to hear just what pleases them, you know.
I have experience along with heavy leg. You wouldn't like to have me performing any acts of physical violence upon you (not that I'd like to perform them upon you anyway).
I think it's high time I broke the vicious circle. When one attempts to look up a "tissue" by typing "husteczka" (sic!), it's better for said one to go to bed.
Nighty night. Have sweet dreams with sh*tloads of cute bunnies :3
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At the moment, he's away on holidays, scouring the Tibet. When he's home, he usually entertains me next to a swimming pool, serving drinks with arsenic.
But I love violence!
Nje trzewa, mam husteczke pszy zobie.
Do zobaczenia, miłej nocy, a ja chyba sobie obejrzę Supernaturala, bo wszyscy wiedzą, że horrory najlepiej ogląda się przed snem ;)
*takes a certain bunny *coughs*lapin*coughs* to bed* Now I'm certain the dreams will be sweet! Thanks for well wishes ;)
G'night.
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