Ah, effortless and delicate scene. How I love you.

Apr 23, 2010 21:58

Today in SORROW'S KNOT, I got my hero Otter to take temporary leave of her friend and head down the side of a mountain to The Next Place Where The Plot Needs Her To Be.  It's only a short scene -- maybe a thousand words -- but it's a lovely one:  effortless and delicate writing, a moment of decision which arises suddenly and believably from the hidden depths of Otter's heart.  I mention this in case anyone here follows my twitter stream, which has recently featured the following entries:

April 13:  This is dumb, but I've got these characters.  I need to get them down this mountain. And they won't go.

April 14:  Okay. Today I AM going to find a way to get the characters from A to B. Even if that way is an avalanche.

April 16:  I am STUCK. STUCK, STUCK, STUCK. I don't know what made me think I could write, but I was deluding myself.

April 19:  I think I'll just leave them up there to die.

April 21:  "So they all stayed by the hot spring for while, then winter came and they died.  The end."

sorrow's knot, writer funk

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