Friday haiku two for one
holding hard
to the silky edge of the blanket --
my daughter sleeping
....
more snow
buries the snowdrops
I like that first one but it needs a lot of work. Too worked. Think I'm okay about it not having a kigo (season word). I like the hard/soft but maybe it's too explicit ....?
to the silky edge of the blanket --
my daughter sleeping
....
more snow
buries the snowdrops
I like that first one but it needs a lot of work. Too worked. Think I'm okay about it not having a kigo (season word). I like the hard/soft but maybe it's too explicit ....?