"Too Good To Deny It" (4/4) - Heroes (Elle/Claire)

[erimthar]

This is set about ten months after the events of "Departure," and is off on an alternate future from the official continuity of Heroes. With Primatech and Pinehearst gone, Claire and Elle have formed their own "company", dedicated to tracking down rogue individuals with dangerous powers, and either turning them over to the government... or hiding

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[eternal_moonie]

WOOHOO!! I totally loved this story!!!

I have only three words.....

[polybi]

MORE MORE MORE!

You have been an inspiration.

Re: I have only three words.....

[polybi]

I may have to do this in more than one post, but ket me just say as a fan of eClaire, I am more than pleased with what you have done. It is inspiring me for my own writings, and I love the characters you have added. More to come...

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[polybi]

The characters Kelly and Green (cute) were alsofun to note. Kelly could have easily been the SeriousLookingWoman in the Destiny online mini-series. As for Green Fairy...that could be Abby from NCIS with blend hair.

The middle plot I loved: it was like Claire's Murtaugh to Elle's Riggs (see Lethal Weapon). My main question is who WAS Heidi's intended target. Did Heidi just recognize Claire and decided then and there to get revenge on Noah Bennett through his daughter (obvisously not knowing Claire's power) OR was Claire the intended victim? If it was that latter, was Claire set up, by Kelly, Greene, or someone else unknown (hopefully the latter). Plus is it was revenge by Heidi, what did Noah do to her. You have opened up quite the possibilities, and I hope that you pursue this in further episodes.

And as many of the posters have mentioned, the erotic and romantic interplay between Claire and Elle is nothing short of Magic.

KEEP IT UP!!