We're all part of the masterplan.

[erigon]

The ability to avoid mistakes for as long as possible is treasured, but the ability to react and recover from adversity is necessary. My ability to avoid mistakes has failed me on occasion, like that ability tends to do, but my ability to recover has never let me down. Often, it outperforms even my own expectations. At midnight on September 10,

Comments

[feast]

Is this your entire essay? It's not bad--actually, it's pretty good. But there are parts that strike me as unreasonably cliche and cheesy. Also, I think you should throw in a "over nine thousand," just on the off chance that someone such as myself is reading your essay.

[lordimperator]

How long does this essay need to be?

Also, this would read better as one sentence: A relentless love for strategy games has taught me valuable analytical life lessons. Evaluate the risks. Pick your fights. Persevere. Refuse to stagnate.