He runs.

Sep 15, 2011 01:13

Title: He runs.
Pairing: Taemin/Minho
Rating: G
Summary: He rips the letter and pretends he's the hero in that children's tale, throwing small pieces on the street and hoping he'll someday find his way back home.
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fanfiction, minho, taemin

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blitzkickz September 15 2011, 04:28:42 UTC


Ah but Taemin, are you happy? Is there something else behind those flippant words?

Ah, what I'd do to know how Minho really feels...

Anyways, this is utterly beautiful. Such selfishness. A lot of authors refuse to protest that in their writing, especially with Taemin (at least in this way).

Thank you for writing and sharing!
<3

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ericaslade September 15 2011, 14:28:11 UTC
Of course there is, I don't think he's happy. It's just that he has reached a point where getting away means more to him than anything else. I think he'll go back home...:)
Thank you for reading, you are so sweet. yeah, the selfishness, I wanted it to come out like this. I'm glad it shows!

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potaoto September 15 2011, 04:56:13 UTC
oh the ending ;___;

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ericaslade September 15 2011, 14:26:34 UTC
Thank you very much for the review, I'm glad you liked the ending, sometimes I think my stories don't have enough description of feelings, but I've come to terms with my inability to express them :P
Thank you very much!

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thankyouandyou September 15 2011, 11:09:00 UTC
"I was cold and hungry, but at least, I was born and free."

Holy shit. I read it last night -why do you always upload late at night when I'm not lucid enough to comment- and it just left me searching for my heart and my jaw on my bedroom floor. This is heartbreaking and I love it- i love the imagery, the monologue, the twist, the idea itself, I love your writing and I always have.

This is gorgeous and you're awesome, and now I'll read it again.

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ericaslade September 15 2011, 14:23:31 UTC
I upload late at night because I write late at night, and this is full of mistakes, I know, I know, but I wrote it in an hour after a really long day, forgive me, I burden lj with late-night thoughts!

As always, your words make me happeh (so you go write soon!!) that one line is the only thing I like from this silly fic, it reminds me the joys of walking in empty streets at night. For some reason.
I make no sense!
Thank you, honeypie :)

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hazellicious September 15 2011, 18:25:35 UTC
Wow. This is beautiful.
And I just happened to be listening to piano music.

CURSE YOU.
*teary*

This is just so heartbreaking, yet, beautiful. The way he's so free, letting go, yet regretting and kind of bitter, missing Minho. And Jonghyun. BWAAAAAAHHH.
Oh god.
*starts bawling her eyes out*

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ericaslade September 15 2011, 19:40:11 UTC
YOU?IT'S...YOU?I adore you, girl.really.Wow,it IS you.
I love your fics. I do. Oh, I'm so excited <3

Don't curse me, I meant no harm!!

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