Yesterday (Team Angst) - Paradigm Shift, PG-13, Gen

Jun 23, 2009 01:53

Title: Paradigm Shift
Author: starlettmalfoy
Pairing/Characters: Charlie Eppes, Don Eppes, Amita Ramanujan, Colby Granger, OMC
Rating/Category: PG-13/Gen
Word Count: 2,124
Spoilers: Seasons 1-5, 5.23 Angels and Devils
Summary: A stray bullet erases 4 years of his life.
Notes/Warnings: Written for Team Angst for round 16 of numb3rswriteoff with the prompt "Yesterday". Unbetaed ( Read more... )

[f] numb3rs, [r] pg-13, fic, numb3rswriteoff, [c] amita, [w] angst, gen, [c] don, [c] charlie

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spikedluv June 23 2009, 12:18:33 UTC
Oh man. Poor Charlie. One blow after another. I felt so bad for Charlie when he realized that Amita had married Colby, and yet, somehow, I felt worse for Don when Charlie left. *sniffle*

I kept seeing shades of The Dead Zone as I read this, especially when it was Colby who married Amita; was that on purpose?

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starlettmalfoy June 23 2009, 12:28:43 UTC
*claps* Exactly the reaction I was going for, actually. I felt ridiculously bad for Don too - I mean, think about it; he was there when Charlie woke. How many days did he devote over the last 4 years to sitting by Charlie's bedside, praying for a miracle?

>.<

The Dead Zone? I've actually never seen it! So nope, totally not on purpose. :)

Thanks for the comment! <3 This was fun! I'll have to sign up more often. Lol.

Edited once because it's 7:30 in the morning and I know not of what I type, apparently.

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spikedluv June 23 2009, 13:16:32 UTC
Yes, exactly! For four years Don's taken care of Charlie, and then one day he just vanishes. He must be devastated. Especially since (I'm presuming) their father is dead, as well.

You've really never seen The Dead Zone?!!! See, first I thought you were gonna have Charlie suffer from amnesia, so when you did the coma, I was completely blindsided. But. Johnny, in TDZ, was in a coma for 6 years (Charlie for 4, but you even mentioned 6, so I thought it might be a reference). Johnny was engaged to Sarah (who was pregnant with Johnny's child when he was in the accident), who ended up marrying Walt while Johnny was in the coma, with Walt and Sarah raising Johnny' s son, who is named Johnny after his father. As the cherry on top, Walt was played by Chris Bruno. So I thought for SURE that this fic was an homage of sorts. So many similarities, I'm still reeling that they were all coincidences! *g*

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starlettmalfoy June 23 2009, 20:39:15 UTC
Holy crap! No, I had no idea about *any* of that. I actually had to look up The Dead Zone earlier when you referenced it. >.<

Weird! I mean, really... weird. LOL. Accidental homage! XP

And yes, you presumed right about Alan. Or, at least, that's what my mind was thinking of when I wrote it. Perhaps, someday, Don will go after him even though he was asked not to? Or Charlie will come back...? *glares at the teh bunnies*

Hmm.

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spikedluv June 23 2009, 21:39:24 UTC
Haha, yes! So you can see why I thought you'd purposely written an homage to TDZ. *g*

And yes, Don should totally go after Charlie. Charlie's whole life has been turned upside down; he's not thinking straight!! He shouldn't be alone right now!! *g*

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