Comments | eponine119: Lost fic: Dancing Feet [Shannon/Boone, 300 words, PG]

eponine119

Lost fic: Dancing Feet [Shannon/Boone, 300 words, PG]

Jul 30, 2008 20:16

Notes: For janie_tangerine at the luau, who wanted Hearts & Minds and barefoot. Shannon/Boone, rated PG, 300 words.

Dancing Feet
by eponine119
July 30, 2008

( Your feet are so ugly. )

[lost_fanfic]-shannon/boone, [lost_fanfic]-all

Comments 16

bluelittlegirl July 31 2008, 04:58:37 UTC

Adding that much more depth to Shannon, making her real, it makes me miss her.

eponine119 July 31 2008, 19:40:41 UTC

Thank you. I love it when she's real. It makes me miss her too.

hopelessfangirl July 31 2008, 06:47:27 UTC

Aw, I love dancer!Shannon. This is lovely!

eponine119 July 31 2008, 19:40:53 UTC

Thank you!

alemyrddin July 31 2008, 08:17:56 UTC

This scene is so meaningful, it shows their affection and the push and pull of their relationship so well.
I loved it.

eponine119 July 31 2008, 19:41:13 UTC

Thank you! It's so fun to write the back and forth between them.

janie_tangerine July 31 2008, 08:34:32 UTC

OMG thank you so much! I loved it really. Your take on the prompt was just great, I wouldn't have thought of it but it fits so well. And yeah, Boone and bare feet.... *licks lips* *cough* seriously, this said so much in so few words about the two of them. The dynamic is perfect, the dialogue is, too, and I melted a bit at the dancing part. And it was so good an insight into the both of them, thank you so much for writing it! I absolutely love it. ♥

eponine119 July 31 2008, 19:41:35 UTC

Oh, yay, I'm so glad this hit the target! ♥

slybrunette July 31 2008, 18:06:40 UTC

I love how much this says about Shannon, in so few words. This is so meaningful, so poignant.

Wonderful!

eponine119 July 31 2008, 19:41:47 UTC

Thank you!