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[fic] Glass Houses (PG-13) Yunjae

May 26, 2009 15:07

Title: Glass Houses
Authors: itsplashes and kayjayloves
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: PG-13
Genre: angst/romance
Word Count: 3215 words (oneshot)
Summary: Yunho wonders when it started. A dream within a dream within a dream.
A/N: Dedicated to our wonderful betas under_an_oak, miyamoto, and gumi. Thanks for putting up with us. <3 With an honorable mention for tvxqluvv. Because she's that awesome.

( It started when they were sixteen.Yunho was a boy, just a boy, with sharp eyes and long limbs. He looked confident, chin held high, movements fluid, and Jaejoong wondered, fleetingly - carefully, what he would look like if he stumbled and fell. )

- dong bang shin ki, rating: pg-13, pairing: yunjae

Comments 43

kayjayloves May 26 2009, 07:13:00 UTC

spot for gumi
basically. we love you. /glomptackle.

ex_teary May 26 2009, 14:48:23 UTC

/died a little on the inside. in the best way possible. ♥

its disjointedness and jostling, slightly repetitive, not-there moments give the impression of how overwhelmingly heart-breaking this really is.

kayjayloves May 26 2009, 07:16:08 UTC

spot for tvxqluvv
yeah. we went there. /points up to honorable mention. <3

perfectstart May 26 2009, 07:54:36 UTC

and spot for myself?

:D

perfectstart May 27 2009, 01:30:54 UTC

oh why why why? ;-;

the hosu ♥ part, the changmin and jaejoong together.
idk.

): how could you? oh my heart.

itsplashes June 3 2009, 05:36:19 UTC

I'm glad you liked it or rather, er, I'm glad it made you feel. /dies We were really angsty, weren't we?

Thanks for reading and commenting, bb.

weerainbow May 26 2009, 12:17:11 UTC

*takes deep breath*
This broke my heart.
The tension between them all was almost too much to bear. The dinner table scene with only Jaejoong and Changmin being there yet setting the table for them all...in hope...spoke of a longing for something they couldn't have :o(
When Junsu climbed into Yunho's bed and cuddled close to him my heart melted. Their words were filled with confusion, but at least there was some comfort there.
The YunJae was so tragic...painful.
But it was so beautifully written. There was something really poetic about this piece that really spoke to me.
<3

kayjayloves June 3 2009, 05:40:09 UTC

/squishes you.

Ah, I like that, the mention of longing, and comfort. and some ot5ness And that something about our piece spoke to you <3

Thank you bb ♥ for reading and commenting.

su_dreams May 26 2009, 12:57:55 UTC

ugh. cliffhanger. ugh ugh ugh.

one of the rare occasions of when yunjae makes me weep in anguish. damn.

[i see angsty!yoosu there~~ LOLs. or is it only me who thinks the teeny yoosu angty?]

itsplashes June 3 2009, 05:40:39 UTC

/facepalm

Thanks for reading and commenting, bb. There's just something innately angsty about Yunjae and it really came out easily.

(Yes, bb. You got it right! XD It's angsty!Yoosu. /dies)