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wusswoo June 11 2010, 13:52:00 UTC
Oh that was a lovely story. Jeff looking after Jensen made me go all squidgy!! I do love that Jensen never really lost his feistiness. I hope there's going to be another instalment when they get back to Harmony (I wanna know whether they can fix Jensen!!) Loved it xx

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epeeblade June 14 2010, 20:21:08 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

And yes, I will eventually write about what happens when they get to Harmony:)

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cjandre June 11 2010, 14:08:33 UTC
This was great! I think the way Jensen was rebuilding himself was wonderful.

Poor Tom! I hope we get to hear more about him. It seems cruel to leave him like that.

Jeff and Jared's interactions were spot on as well. My only regret with this fic is that it stopped before Harmony. Now I have to be patient all over again! *sniff*

Still - this was a brilliant installment and I look forward to more!

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epeeblade June 14 2010, 20:23:14 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

I kinda had to stop before Harmony, otherwise I would have run out of time! I am planning on writing that, don't worry:)

And, now I feel really bad for Tom. Poor guy! But it won't be the last we see him.

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duchess5492 June 11 2010, 15:25:50 UTC
That was great, both of them getting to know each other's families and friends. Absolutely loved it! Two thumbs up! Now I cannot wait for when Jeff and Jensen make the trip to Harmony. Can't wait for the next installment.

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epeeblade June 14 2010, 20:24:04 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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live_laugh_love June 11 2010, 15:37:52 UTC
OMG I have to tell you that since you posted the last installment and said that you'd be posting your BB on 11 Jun I have been FRANTICALLY REFRESHING all day long until it got here. I love this story SO MUCH. I can only hope that there will be more to come with them going back to Harmony.

You are extremely talented, and I enjoyed reading this so much I'm going to read it again right now. Thank you.

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epeeblade June 14 2010, 20:24:44 UTC
*blushes* Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it so much! Yes, I am planning on writing more, just not any time soon, unfortunately.:)

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neon_footprint June 11 2010, 15:48:08 UTC
Oh my god, you're some kind of genius <3

I don't know what kind fo feedback I gave you on Meadows of Heaven last year, but I am still recommending it to people as a masterwork of the genre. This is a wonderful continuation of the verse. Your characters are convincing, whole, real. Tom and Sophia are really brilliant, and oh god Mike.

I loved seeing so much more of Jared, he's totally endearing. The complexity of Jeff, of Jensen, of their dynamic, is what carries this story though. It may not have been your intention, I don't know, but this is a story to bring hope to the hearts of survivors of rape and sexual abuse. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I look forward to there being more of the verse (hopefully that's not too presumptuous with an open ending!).

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epeeblade June 14 2010, 20:26:48 UTC
*blushes deep red* Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for reccing Meadows!

Poor Mike! I hate to say it, but his death was determined way back when I wrote Amaranth. All of them have been damaged by their experiences with the Corps in some way.

Yes, I am planning more:) I don't know when, but they will be going back to Harmony.

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